Regina, the little human daughter of two newfoal parents, finally decides to get ponified...with unusual results.
Written for The Conversion Bureau Event Nine: Seaponies
Dat cover art hurt my heart.
Oh lord. Seaponies in TCB, this isn't going to end well.
Glad to see you got it finished, and a very nice little sea story
Is it just me, or does the seapony on the cover art look like ??
But anyways, great story
Great story good sir. I loved it!
Definitely my favorite submission so far.
“You, young one, will have a difficult, but worthy life ahead of you when you awake. fate has chosen for you a different from that that of your parents.”
FOOOOOOOOLISH BRONY, CAPITALIZE FATE
‘Oh, but, heh, of course some...pony..her age would never be expected to work like that. You three, after her orientation period, will be placed in one of the coastal regions near a seapony colony, probably Currents Crossing, and that’ll be that.”
Should be ", not '
Bob chuckled to himself. maybe he’d get one soon...or not.
Again, with the capitalization. You seem to have a poor relationship with the shift key.
Anyway, this was cute. Even if “At least our daughter has sense enough to pick a proper name.” creeps the hell outta me. Out of all the G1 stuff I think the seaponies would've been a good addition to MLP:FIM, so this was a neat challenge to write for and I think you did a good job.
The shift key is my bane, and even more so when I'm writing on a netbook. Every keyboard has a different "accent" with me.
The 'shift' key is a universal bane to my existence.
EDIT: And fixed. Thanks again, Zed
Interesting thing, they seaponies (And merponies) live in Aquastria in an upcoming picture book and are ruled by King Leo (Celestia and Luna cousin)