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Candypony


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Almost a millennium has passed since the benevolent Princess Celestia's rule came to an end. Under the flag of the Lunar Empire, Equestria has flourished over the centuries, expanding in territory, in science, and in war. However, not everypony is content with the more disturbing directions the Empress has taken in recent years. Her army has been increased dramatically and new weapons technologies are being developed every day, as if she's preparing for a war of astronomic scale. Thus formed the Sunseekers, a band of so-called rebels operating in the Imperial Capital, Eclipse. But now, their leader is being plagued with dreams of a mysterious pegasus thief who might be the key the Empress herself is looking for.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 7 )

Looks like a very interesting story. Keep it up.

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Thanks. Still working on reworking a few more chapters to fit my current vision. After that, it'll be a lot longer in between chapters since I'll be starting from scratch. Sort of.

Nice story, interesting story. (I love dark stories)
I really enjoy your writing skills, yet you don't overdo it.
Keep it up! I'd like to read more (:

Gave it a chance and no. Ive seen the same descriptive of a pony feeling wind in his coloured hair a dozen times. I dont know whether its because i personally support the NLR or because your prologue isnt as exciting as i hoped

Act One is completely revised and uploaded. All in one sitting. Damn, insomnia is productive.

This is infinitely better than the first draft.
If this becomes as much of an epic as that did, this could easily be one of the best dark fics IMO.

Edit: Could still use some significant editing.
This is what happens when you write past the 25-hours-of-consciousness mark, people :x

And a heads-up to everyone else: this will probably go unupdated for a month or two. Because Candypony is about as lazy as they come.

Edit again: Goddamn. If you don't at least start writing again by the start of summer, I'm just going to finish the damn story for you.

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