A rescued changeling philosophizes on the meaning of love.
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Baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me no more.
951048 i was just about to say that
951048, so close to saying that.
951048 I came here just to say that
Hunter C. Creed
951048
Why?!
Why couldn't I be just a little bit faster?!
^ Lol every comment above.
Oh yeah, and, uh, good story.
951135 It was just an experiment in first-personness. I've never done it before.
It was just meant to be short and mildly cute. And not at all long-winded, rambling, and half crazy. Failed pretty hard there! :D
Might adapt it to something much longer and more intense when I finish Antecedent.
Aaand I've read it. Makes me think of Bioshock 2's 'Love is a chemical, we give it meaning' thing. That's pretty good. Also, I assume this story isn't in the same universe as Transcend? I'm not sure why I expected it to be, but whatever.
951048 I think we all came here just to say that
951186 definitely not same universe. Different changelings entirely :3
Oh, I don't know, why you're not there
I give you my love, but you don't care
So what is right, and what is wrong
Gimme a sign...
Damn, this was deep. I don't dislike Changelings anymore. Just their queen now.
That was interesting. I enjoyed my little trip through the bothered changeling's mind. I also agree this could grow to more than a oneshot but I think it works perfectly well the way it is.
Either way thanks for letting me read.
Oh, and the first person was fine but for future practice you may want to try something more dynamic than talking to oneself.
Do you know what I think when I see what is love?
Mushrooms, those who watch protonjon's videos know what I'm talking about.
951156
Is the Changeling is someone we know ? Is it a girl ?
I need moar.
I think this story deserves a lot better than 'mildly cute', well done
955019 We meet the changlings in the Season 2 finale episodes (a 2 parter) about the Royal Wedding between Princess Cadence and Shining Armor (Twilight Sparkle's big brother) Linky to part 1
Like Stryker12324, I don't dislike changlings as much anymore either. I like this perspective. Unusual, but enjoyable.
For a moment there, I expected Haddaway.
I've been looking for a story like this! An undisguised Changeling in love with a pony that returns that love without hesitation. Very sweet and cute. Great stuff.
951220
Yeah, this changeling seems quite nice, unlike the minion murderer (still hate that ending).
So I'd been meaning to read this and finally got reminded of it, very interesting psychological trip.
*Head bob mode engaged*
952465 Agreed!
I love changelings!
...
Like, who doesn't like their brethren?
I'm guessing that this turned into An Affliction of the Heart
This was one of the best romance stories I think I have encountered during my time on this site. Good job, dude.
1628173 Indeed it did
Wow, that is deep. I had never given changelings this much thought. Clearly it complicates things if they stick around instead of eating and running.
And the first-person was good, especially the ending.
951220
Is this Changeling Kuno ?
1829992 this idea sort of BECAME An Affliction of the Heart. So in a way, yes, this is Kuno. But it's not canon
(insert Vynyl HeadBanging Here)
1830001 so this was like, an original Kuno? is this, like, what she thought once in the first one. (not the sequel) or perhaps inbetween the first one and the sequel? also, lemme jsut say, I love pretty much all of your stuff I have read. you're amazing. have 10 assorted emotes
1830001
I found a small error I think:
You mean "Ever since he found me," right?
Besides that, I absolute loved every word. Warden X Kuno is my favorite couple, next to Doctor Whooves, and Derpy.
Baby don't hurt me no more
Filly don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no more
a pain in the ass is what love is
951048
Wow, I was waaaaaay too late getting here.
Love is just a mountain ride.What kind of vehicle you are defines what kind of person you are. You get higher then lower. The higher you are, the more problems you have. You go slow and you go fast. Time defines how quick life is. There could be an avalanche or rock slide. It stops your ride. Its unexpected really. That is my definition of love.
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BABY DUN HURT MEH
DUN HURT MEH
NO MOAR
5578154 Posted that 101 weeks ago...well
5578164 WAHT IS LUV
BITCH IM A CHANGELING
A CHANGELING
FAQ U.
WAHT IS LUV
5578179 Excuse me?
5578185 Ah sed...
FAK YOOOOOOOOO
5578196 What did I do to you?
5578210 Wait, you're taking this seriously?!
I thought the video would've cleared it up...
5578218 Bad reception only read the title.
5578225 "Im a boss ass bitch bitch bitch."
Tittle are readed. And now...We're back!
WAT IS LURV
BEBEH DUN HERT MEE
DUN HERT MEE
NO MOOOOOOR
Late, late, late to the party but: this is beautiful. Just that.
O by the queen... Your sure have a was to make changlings better ponys eatch chapter/story/ story tale you write