Aunt and Uncle Orange have invited Apple Bloom to Manehattan for a week, hoping that she will help socialize their unruly adopted griffon cub. The new cousins' friendship is off to a rocky start, but perhaps an incident in Princess Luna's disturbing new planetarium will teach them an important lesson.
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Well written, great length. Almost made it feel believable that the Oranges would adopt a griffin cub. I gotta give credit to Gottfried, stepping up and taking responsibility before an angered goddess, that shows some character.
Good. Really good, original, about griffins and shows that noble ponies is good too. Frankly, I'm tired of everyone demonizing high-class ponies, glad to see that new episode shown us nice colt Fancy Pants, and now your fic shows good Oranges. Great job!
Such a nice story :3 I particularly like the differences between pony and griffon mindsets and how the griffons seem to only respect tenacity and strength rather than wealth or entitlement. Although, I was rather curious to hear more about the orb when Gottfried was sentenced to join Luna in acquiring the lost items.
I can't believe this doesn't have more attention.
Really well done! I was hoping there'd be more but I really enjoyed what was there.
Dangit, now I can't wait to hear about the world/dimension in the orb. That and I can only imagine the interesting character-building pairing Gottfried and Luna could offer (especially if A.B. insisted on going with as an "accomplice")







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