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Passport-Clean 300

Joined December 2011
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    Passport-Clean's Stories (3)

    • Tilt
      Applejack's favorite pinball machine, 'Sea Pony Symphony', has a nasty surprise in store for her.

      13,209 words · 735 views · 50 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Kicked to the Cub
      Aunt and Uncle Orange have a dangerous new cousin waiting for Apple Bloom: an adopted griffon.
      9,952 words · 892 views · 20 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Where There's Smoke, There's Ire
      Applejack and the waiter Horte Cuisine get into an escalating feud over their shared vice.
      11,738 words · 608 views · 11 likes · 1 dislikes

    Aunt and Uncle Orange have invited Apple Bloom to Manehattan for a week, hoping that she will help socialize their unruly adopted griffon cub. The new cousins' friendship is off to a rocky start, but perhaps an incident in Princess Luna's disturbing new planetarium will teach them an important lesson.

    First Published
    7th Dec 2011
    Last Modified
    7th Dec 2011

    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · 76w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Well written, great length. Almost made it feel believable that the Oranges would adopt a griffin cub. I gotta give credit to Gottfried, stepping up and taking responsibility before an angered goddess, that shows some character.

    #2 · 76w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Good. Really good, original, about griffins and shows that noble ponies is good too. Frankly, I'm tired of everyone demonizing high-class ponies, glad to see that new episode shown us nice colt Fancy Pants, and now your fic shows good Oranges. Great job!

    #3 · 76w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Such a nice story :3 I particularly like the differences between pony and griffon mindsets and how the griffons seem to only respect tenacity and strength rather than wealth or entitlement. Although, I was rather curious to hear more about the orb when Gottfried was sentenced to join Luna in acquiring the lost items.

    #4 · 76w, 2h ago · · ·
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    I can't believe this doesn't have more attention.

    Really well done! I was hoping there'd be more but I really enjoyed what was there.

    #5 · 73w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Dangit, now I can't wait to hear about the world/dimension in the orb.  That and I can only imagine the interesting character-building pairing Gottfried and Luna could offer (especially if A.B. insisted on going with as an "accomplice")

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