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MightyShockwave


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Scootaloo steals a vorno (vore porno) tape from Rainbow Dash's secret stash. She and her friends might get a little more than what they bargained for on the weekly CMC movie night. A film about the changeling invasion of Canterlot that takes a LOT of artistic liberties might not be the best thing for little fillies to watch.

(Warning: Contains vore , digestion , and confused fillies)

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Comments ( 18 )

Hahahhahaha first...now to read.

Pretty well written and a fair pass st the painless vore...not my cup of tea but I know those who will want this forwarded. The transition from bad porn to willing soup was a little...oddly paced but no real suggestions so take it as you will.

The main thing I take from this though is that Rainbow Dash is a closet vorarephile.

Probably never getting any resolution on that, huh? XD

good read

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Thanks!

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Perhaps in the future~

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Either that or she's been replaced by a changeling.

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So I wasn't the only one who considered that, there are obvious problems with that idea, but still a neat way to take it.~

Read this fic because I wanted to know further what a vorno entailed. I was INFORMED

His flesh giggled

I think you meant jiggled.

Interesting read. Managed to just skirt the line between T and M with how graphic the digestion process was.

It was nice having them both be into it though, despite the result.

strangest story ive read so far

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euch... or she had fixation on that particular Wonderbolt O.o

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I'd have given this an M, personally.

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Understandable.

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Thanks. I've sometimes found myself sliding toward one or the other to be safe.

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^Basically Apple Bloom now. LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE SCOOTALOO!

Hrm. I’m not big on fatal vore even if it’s willing.

That said, the second half/last third of the story felt tacked on. It’s like you got through the swallowing part and thought “I wrote a cute silly vore story, time to cash in on the hardcore crowd.”

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It was a little different from my usual fare, but I felt like experimenting.

Hmm, I think the one big problem is this feels disjointed in how the events of the movie the CMC watching are portrayed; at the start, it seems like a bad porno, where the mare isn't really into it and can barely act and the setup isn't even properly sex (which is kinda funny), but then once she's swallowed, it switches to a sensual journey where the mare is fully into it. Sure, the mare's mind is being affected and she's getting genuine feelings, but it would make more sense if she was a little aroused early on in addition to having trouble acting, and still flubbed a line while in the stomach.
It's also...really strange for a porno to be lacking in any butt/genital area touching. Sure, it's about vore, but why lack any sexual aspects prior to orgasmic melting, even touching of the butt during swallowing? A changeling would be able to literally tonguefuck a mare while swallowing them!

Also, any chance we see a sequel with Bug Bellies 1 and Ocellus? The CMC's innocence has to be ruined further! :moustache:

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