I approve of this. You can add it to the group yadda yadda yadda.

WOOT! GO PROUD!! YOU GOT THIS!! WELCOME TO THE CHESSIVERSE MY GOOD FRIEND!

Interesting start.....let's see where this goes

Oh no, they've attacked, everybody run ^^^

Bout time you've posted this.

Damn. That guy sur f*cked up with his dreams. Joker style.

"You either die a hero, or you live long enough to see you become the villain."

*ahem*... It's about time this got put up, I'd been wanting to read the story of the mysterious Notus Eques for a while! Ever since I read the Badasses blog, but I couldn't find this. Well, it's here now, and that makes me happy.

Anyway, I'm off to read the next chapter.

Interesting premise. More updates anytime soon?

i shall wait for more

Proud, I just, you know, love this.

I mean, seriously, this imagery is intense.

Though, I will admit, your story is going to have be very long, if this is what occurs in this amount of words.

Not that that's a bad thing

So Colors found Notus after he got punted?

Too many details for my tired eyes

Great story bro. If I had anything to add, it would be that you maybe could do a bit more in the dialogue-department.

Description and details are important, but there IS such a thing as going overboard.

-Glassed

I demand moar!

This story is amazing!

My goodness, I feel so bad that I haven't read this sooner, but it's just so jarring to read something where the author goes, "You know what, screw the unintelligent, smart people can read too." In short, it's quite... refreshing to see something that agrees that I have at least some level of intelligence, and makes a story that is rather pleasing to read to boot (don't get me started on ones that know readers are intelligent and DON'T make an interesting story *cough* most "literary classics", especially those that are called so by pretentious yuppies now-a-days *cough* )