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NaiKujibo 2140

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    I figured that one of two scenarios were the most likely:

    #1 I really was in Equestria and it would be in my best interests to play dumb. I figured that it would be weird enough if someone you didn't know knew who you were, so something you didn't know would be twice as creepy;

    or #2 I was hallucinating and for all I knew, Twilight and company would grow fangs and start tearing me apart and it wouldn't matter anyways.

    What? I'm just being realistic here.

    First Published
    11th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 15 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2h ago · · ·
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    o.o I .... LIKE it. *nodnod*

    Oh, also: First.

    Chapters are a bit short, though. I like 'em, but I'd love more OF 'em. @_@ Still I track and thumb.

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 1h ago · · ·
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    I agree with the mans name that is to long to type so I shall call him RCS, Indeed I like these but chapters could be a tad longer, not much just a little, then I will love it! :P you have earned my favorite thus far though, would like to see how this plays out.

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 55m ago · · ·
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    Oh god i just wake up from a nap and i read this!

    I'm laughing like... i dunno... i'm laughing like a fucking... train? :rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 21m ago · · ·
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    They like it they really like it!

    :yay:

    *ahem* well these chapters were meant to set up the story, so I'll see about making them longer in the future. Glad you guys are enjoying it so far.

    p51
    #5 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I came into reading this story feeling like a pile of crap (since i have a fever and all that jazz, so i dont exactly feel on top of the world right now. this face shows me right now :pinkiecrazy:)

    this is one of the brightest stories i've read in a while. very humorous, and i like humor right now.  

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    lol whut liked

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    AAAAAAAND its faved thank you good sir please continue

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Lol wut:rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Please continue my good sir:twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1083501

    Continuing as we speak.

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I have my eyes on you:pinkiecrazy:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1083528

    Oh yeah well I have an eye on you while simultaneously an eye over there :derpyderp2:

    DF
    #13 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6h ago · · ·
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    Some of the sentence structure could need work, a consistent usage of past/present tense would be nice, but otherwise, well executed and interesting.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I like what's happening.

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is gonna be interesting. Have a favorite.

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