Sorry, this was all I could think about while reading this.

Well....I read the discription and I lost intrest, BUT, maybe I'll give it a read...later

ahem

FLUTTERMAC!!!!!

That is all.

Interesting...very interesting indeed.

>>947219947219 The average FlutterMac fanfic.

And that, ladies and gentlemen, is why FlutterMac is best ship.

Fluttershy sings, "ALWAYS I WANNA BE WITH YOU AND MAKE BELIEVE WITH YOU AND LIVE IN HARMONY HARMONY OH LOVE "   and big mac, "eenope?"

>>947563947563 "...IT CAN'T BE SEEN BUT THERE'S BLOOD ON THIS GREEN ONLY CELSTIA KNOWS IM INNOCENT! TAKE ME TAKE ME!" "..."

>>947563947563 I love that SONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh snap!

>>948205948205 ME TOO!!!!

>>948435948435 ROBOT UNICORN ATTACK!

>>948464948464

yes :3 It's RUA sound track, although I was speaking about Erasures song its self xD

I like this idea, good job

Please, please, please make more! It is very good fic, so don't give up just now!!! MOAR!!!

And please don't make it another clopfic... pwease?

>>957387957387it wnt be that i promice

>>959258959258 Pinkie promise?

>>959383959383pinkie promise. in fact, i just need to proof read the next chapter and have a friend of mine edit some things and have it up sometime soon

What is he, a love doctor!?

Nice story so far. Tracking.

Besides a few spelling mistakes (Scotaloo), very good chapter!

>>993774993774I will make sure to go back and fix a few of those

This is one of the  very few stories i really enjoy.

>>995189995189thanks good to know :)

every good feedback makes me want to write more

Yah I found 4 mistakes: call it a light, yeay, Rainbow Dah, can't remember last 1 Hint: use Fn+F3

when Big Mac was thinking you should put what he was thinking in Italic

but still very good story

>>10192941019294i thought i did that

Great chapter and the dialog was very well done but there are some grammatical and spelling errors you might want to fix.

It's spelt Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle btw

>>12010541201054 well i know i have a few things to work on in terms of grammar, but at least the dialogue is good

>>12048361204836 okay thanks, i will fix those soon and note that

>>957387957387hay i made more just as you yelled at me... i mean asked

Good chapter and stuff, its spelled Equestria by the way.

>>12080941208094 *Equestria

I'm just wondering if you have a pre-reader or not, there were some obvious mistakes in this chapter

>>16498781649878 yes i do, but i was just a bit too eager to get this chapter out after a 2 month absence. They will read it sometime today so i hope i didnt create too much confusion with my errors

>>16498781649878 if you wouldnt mind sending a PM and tell me the errors

>>16509211650921 Alright I re-read it and I think I found most of the errors

“Granny Smith. You don’t mind that, do ya?”

“Eeyup.”

After their exchange of information, Fluttershy

“An’ Big Mac,” the cowpony looked forward. “Yall don’t be stayin’ too long at Fluttershy’s. I’ll be needin’ your help, ya hear?”

She started to walk forward as he spoke a low “Eeyup”.

“CUTIE MARK CRUSADER BASKET RETREAVERS! YEAH,"

“I know that silly, but remember how Mrs. Chearly looked at Big Mac when we gave them the love potions?”

“Remember the time when we gave Big Mac and Mrs. Chearly that love poison?”

Big Macintosh nodded his head while the three young ponies shouted, “CUTIE MARK CRUSADER ANIMAL RETRIEVERS

ARE GO!”

I think that's about it