THIS is the fic that got me into reading other fics!

Loved this last time I saw it, and still love it now!  

This has earned you a

As awesome as ever

I don't get the title. "Electric Scootaloo"? There are no foals, chicken or dodos involved... Am I overthinking this?

Great story though. I chuckled.

Why, only the other day I forgot to knock before entering my sister's room only to find her and her servant Sund...

Sundance? From, "Progress"?

BACK TO THE FUCKING MOON!

>>946507946507

Same here! xD

FINALLY!!! it's here, I loved this story. Still just as funny!

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>>946595946595 Reference to the movie Breakin' 2: Electric Boogaloo.

So...I guess Luna's got some pent-up 'feelings' after being on the moon for 1000 years?

>>946606946606

Mmmmmmmmaybe...

And still as funny on the, what third, time I've read this...

Ah, I love this story.    And I hope there is some day a Chapter 3!

Again with the Fifty Shades of .

p.s. LOVE IT

I mean, there was that one time I greased myself up with butter and slid around on the floor of the ballroom singing "Come Sail Away," but last I checked drinking five bottles of vodka doesn't count as going senile.

So apparently I didn't need to breathe today. Breathing is overrated.

I love this story. Thank you for finally putting it up on FIMfiction.

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Sleep tight

Moar. Please more xD

A blast from a not-so-distant past, still as hilarious as it was back then

"I hope you like bananas... Cause your gonna go bananas! ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON. BI-*****"

On situation in which Celestia might actually say this...

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I am crying oh dear sweet Celestia MOAR

WHY DID YOU STOP.

Oh wow, I remember this one! And it's just has hilarious as I remember!

Oh, that was hilarious!  

XD oh my god I actually remember this one. Pure gold!

Please don't be the end, please don't be the end, PLEASE DONT BE THE END!!!!!

I love this fic so much... nothing more to say...

i like this Luna.

Mate, this is brilliant, do more of these!

A fun classic.  Especially Luna's letters..

Light-hearted, ever so sightly risque and well written, what more could I ask for?

Considering that priorto reading this, I read the most disgraceful piece of abhorrent filth on this sight (No I am not exaggerating, it was a grim-dark-clopfic that I really don't want to think about...ever again) I really did need something funny to cheer myself up, and your fic did just that.

I at first couldn't read this because I was laughing so much at the name of chapter two, but once I did it was great.

Personally I prefer this to the fic it is based on, and I always find Celestia and Luna acting un-princess like hilarious.

I really do hope you write more of this, because you really can't have too many laughs.

Well, that came together rather well.

Why, for the love of me, does Fluttershy's journal contain a fictionalized account of you and her and the rest of your friends all having sex in Applejack's barn?  WITH PICTURES?

Yep, I definitely laughed the hardest here.

And while they may not want to know, I'm still not sure if they should skip the whole counseling idea...

Loved it.  One thing though.

"It's a pretty big box too, nine hands on a side"

Hands?  Okay, I know Spike has hands, and Griffons (which are rarely if ever seen) have hands, but would ponies really be using hands as a standard of measurement?  And...hands of which species?

>>949401949401

Well, the thing is, horses are usually measured in a unit called hands, so... I kind of figured...

... yeah, it's kind of dumb.

These are funny as all hell. There are tears coming from my eye holes as I laugh and laugh and laugh and...

Why, for the love of me, does Fluttershy's journal contain a fictionalized account of you and her and the rest of your friends all having sex in Applejack's barn?  WITH PICTURES?

oh dear celestia im dying because of that line

lol, you've gone and made me giggle again.

also, TO THE MOOON!

Keep these coming please!

You used was instead of were some where.  figure it out please.

Loooool! xD This is hilarious. Had to read this after Upon Wings Of Sacrifice. THAT IS SO SAD! ;( This makes me lol though.

if there is not more of this wonder, I will.. umm... kill.. umm.. who could I kill in fandom and not make everyone/pony cry? Maybe..... Those douche bag from the dragons!

All that needs to be emoticon-ed

I just can't stop laughing

I can't see properly due to the tears forming in my eyes due to the laughing oh god the laughing i just can't stop.

I never cried this hard due to laughing your story deserves a place in EQD.

This chapter was even beter than  the last one.

My cheeks hurt due to the laughing, it hurts to laugh, but i just can't stop.

I would love to see this fic to continue but its your call.

It sure is the most hillarious fic i've ever read.

This fic I like.

ANOTHER!!!!

"I mean, there was that one time I

greased myself up with butter and slid

around on the floor of the ballroom

singing "Come Sail Away," but last I

checked drinking five bottles of vodka

doesn't count as going senile."

This made me shat my pants in laughter.

Buck yeah! X3

>>947048947048 I see what you did there.

I was screeching with laughter.

Oh dear Sithis I can't breathe.

This is without question the funniest thing I've read today, and I've been reading a lot of funny things today.

>>951645951645 by the eight and one we have an elder scolls fan

"Cheeky!" I bucking love that word. I can never stop laughing when I see it.

Luna is so very naughty. Who's a silly pony? Luna is a silly pony.

Luna being a scandalous wench is absolutely hilarious, as is her panicked letter to Twilight implying that she'll be perfectly happy hiding under the bed.

Good stuff.

"I have to admit though, I don't really know what you mean regarding the package of books?"

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I laffed.

Hold on, WTB? What does that last letter say? WTB is that supposed to mean? I'm confuuuuuused!

Oh, wait a second... pfff...

"I laughed, I cried... it moved me, Bob."

The only words I need to describe how I feel are quotes from VeggieTales.

Cannot wait for chapter 3 !

Okay, gonna be honest here: probably not going to read this story any time soon, just clicked on it in the featured window to see what all the fuss was about. However...

For naming chapter two Electric Scootaloo, +1000 points!

Have a wonderful day.

>>951895951895

Same here! Great story!

I liked the first chapter; it had pretty much perfectly in-character communication between Celestia and Twilight about a slightly outrageous incident. The humour comes from their reactions to it, trying desperately to be civil and proper.

The second chapter... not so much. Suddenly RD and FS are into S&M? And Celestia is the model for an erotic manual? And the old tired "to the moon" joke? Basically I think the humour of the second chapter is much more crude and cliche than the first chapter, so it was definitely a disappointment.

Oh wow...loved it. Specially the last part with Luna...just...and Fluttershy, really? I just....this is great!

really nice writing laughed so much.

This. Was. BRILLIANT!

I do hope Celestia realizes that sending Luna to the moon would be a big mistake.

For example, Luna could carve into the surface of the moon certain...words.

"CELESTIA TAKES IT DEEP!" springs to mind.

I can't wait for more, if you do decide to continue this.

Cheers

GM

I remember this. I liked it then, still do.

You are without a doubt one of the funniest writers ever!!!

Hilarious like all the best fanfics here.

I think its great! More, please?

I am not really suprised at Fluttershy anymore ever since the Friendship is Carrots

Luna rocks in this

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This was just as hilarious the second time around.

no one else thought lunas last letter was the best ever?!?!?!?!

This is the best way to start a Sunday morning. Giggling like a filly at my computer screen.

Wake up in the morning, check to see if there's a good story to read later, see this.....decide to read, laughed ass off, luna is best princess

Is it friendship with benefits this is linked to? I thought that was where RD and pinkie send a letter to Celestia, It doesn't mention anyone thinking it is a  page of fluttershys journal anythere does it?

I remember one where a mystery Page of clop circulates the mane 6 and no one knows who wrote it but I can't find it now,

Haha the last two letters XD

>>949720949720 YOU'RE TOM FROM EDDSWORLD?!?!?!?

OMG I loved this!!!  You use the letter format for telling a story very well.  its something that I'm pretty sure is rather difficult but you do it flawlessly.  I really hope you write more, I really want to see more of Luna in this story.  Your portrayal of Trolluna is GREAT!!

I always love your takes on Luna. That said, yeah, the last letter made this story.

>>946635946635 I'm with this guy.

I'm pleased to see the question mark at the end of this story, as this...series is simply hilarious. Don't know if you can keep it up, but making another stab at it would be beneficial to all of society.

>>946507946507 When Micthemicrophone read this... He got me into fics.

>>946595946595  I think it's a parody of an old movie title:  "The Electric Boogaloo."

Can someone explain the ending to me??? I'm confused...

>>953252953252

They decide they really don't want to know, but Luna bumps in and points out that she does.

>>953311953311 oh now I get it, thanks. It was sent after celestia's letter and I forgot that twilight asked that question. I hate having a bad memory

luna is best princess again

oh naughtyluna, you silly filly.

it was interesting and i love how luna starts buying some questionable puchases made me crack up

>>952675952675

It's not actually supposed to be a sequel or part of that fic's universe. I just read Friendship with Benefits and thought "huh, so what would happen when Celestia asks Twilight what the hay is going on? I'd love to read THOSE letters." And then my brain did what it does, so I wrote those letters, and because I love the idea that Fluttershy is secretly a sex fiend, I did my own twist on the scenario, and then I said "well maybe a couple of people might think this is funny" and then THIS HAPPENED.

Yeah.

I demand moar. Wait, there's a second chapter. I stand corrcted.

This story practically begs for a sequel. Surely you can't just leave things at that?

pffteeheheheheeteehee

Oh the nostalgia

I have thought long and hard on your last letter and come to the conclusion that you are displaying wisdom far beyond your years, and that no, no I really do not want to know.

pffteeheeheheheehee

>>949591949591 I blame Lyra. I'm not sure how she's responsible, but she seems to be the odds-on favorite.

Also, this was a most delightful blast from the past. To the moon.

Oh god, I love this story!

I mean, there was that one time I greased myself up with butter and slid around on the floor of the ballroom singing "Come Sail Away," but last I checked drinking five bottles of vodka doesn't count as going senile.

>>952164952164

Oh, but in this story Luna is clearly not as much of a writer as an illustrator...

"I mean, there was that one time I greased myself up with butter and slid around on the floor of the ballroom singing "Come Sail Away,""