oh... my frikin god!!!

This is sick and twisted in a sick and twisted way.

I'm going to have to read it several times more, just to be sure.  

Lungs... collapsing... sides... splitting... throat... burning...

EPIC!

Full of lulz!

“They usually get to the good stuff by then.”

Holy Shit Spike watchs porn how the hell does he watch it if they just found the tv. oh god i almost pissed myslef from laughing it was just to good Spike the clam little baby is really a horny little teen dragon.  

LOOL

waht?

what did I just read

Oh. it was something good. Congratulations!

"Shameless rip-off of Fluffershy"

You mean like CoD is to Battlefield?

This is much better than fluffershy in sense of realism.

>>942391942391>>942555942555>>942584942584>>942658942658>>942710942710>>942730942730>>945091945091

Glad you all enjoyed it

>>942634942634>>943641943641>>943812943812

Indeed.

>>945245945245>>945941945941

Never played either of them, to be honest. I was worried that I'd played this a little too 'straight', if that's the right word, but I think it works

>>942546942546

You aren't really upset about this, right? You know that this is meant to be a joke, surely?

*checks thread on Fluffershy*

Oh...

>>946020946020 She wanted to watch it...

Cute little story.

However....

Twilight’s voice no longer sounded raked its way through her ears, and Dash couldn’t feel that heavy weight on her shoulders.

You may wish to clean that one up, because I tripped over that line.

Interesting take on the "Ponies find a porno" fad I can see growing in popularity. More high brow than Fluffershy, but still funny in its own way. Some of those Daring Doo titles sounded like porns though. Not like I'm an expert or anything...

>>948544948544

Thank you And, looking back at it, I could have phrased that a little better. How it could be better I'm not quite sure, but I'll work on a fix.

Thanks for the spot, either way

>>949916949916

I didn't realise this was something of a fad, but I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same

Funny you should mention those Daring Do titles sounding like porn, though

  .This made no sense to me. can some one explain it to me?

Twilight has finally come to terms with her strong sexual desires.

Shameless indeed! Good gosh, this made me laugh more than Fluffershy!

Anyone else wants to know how Rainbow got that fountain of hers?

So, I assume Rainbow Dash had something to do with the horrific cover design?

This is just too perfect. Me gusta all the way.

Why have more people not seen this?

i think the end is strange

this finish like thas

if not i love it