A Father's Concern

What was supposed to be a routine night turned into a total disaster. Chimeras attacked, Flash Sentry's in the hospital, and his parents? Well...

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Godslittleprincess

Godslittleprincess #1 · Nov 20th, 2017 · · ·

Aww, poor guy. Poor family. This story made me tear up a bit.

Bitbit

Bitbit #2 · Nov 20th, 2017 · 1 · ·

NOOOOO the feels r real, ah man here comes the tears😿

EchoWing

EchoWing #3 · Nov 20th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Every good parent should fear outliving their child, especially if their child is a soldier, and you've done a good job of capturing that fear here. Well done.

Graglithan The Greater

Graglithan The Greater #4 · Nov 20th, 2017 · 1 · ·

This alone gave Flash more character than the movies did.

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #5 · Dec 6th, 2017 · · ·

This story was okay, Still a little rushed but an okay one-shot. Though it seemed kinda of a cope out for Flash to just then wake up at the end. You could have written as though they waited overnight for Flash to wake up as family and friends chatted with one another about Flash to keep their hopes up.

Starlight Nova