Hmm, giant spiked metal monstrosity with a deadly looking weapon, acting quite dapper and well-natured in a land of innocent pastel ponies.

Seems Legit.

I'll admit, I'm curious as to where it goes from here; my interest is piqued!

bionicle?

Ohhh yes. We need more Bionicle crossovers, those are awesome. Not even mentioning that the Rahkshi are quite possibly the coolest bamfs of Bionicle.  

The only thing that irks me is that fully organic entities like ponies should be pants-wettingly fucking TERRIFYING to the Rahkshi (or at least freak him out greatly)... I remember reading that some Makuta (who, iirc are actually already very powerful beings) went completely INSANE at the sight of Tren Krom, the only fully organic being of the Bionicle universe...

no bad think ill read on a little more

Hmm... Interesting that he doesn't retain at least some of the Rahkshi's destructive instincts...And I can't help but wonder if Vezon had something to do with this.

Interesting. It sounds as if a Makuta is blocking those memories, but all of them are dead (excluding Miserix and Alternate Teridax). I want to see how this turns out.

Asum chapter! although i do not know where the character is from i am still enjoying this very much!

Faved because Bionicle.... fragile meatbags.

Asum! i was just wondering though why dont you upload more often/longer chapters?

>>11615971161597 Because I'm lazy. I only write when I feel like.

This was difficult for me to read, because Rahkshi are monsters. At least, under the control of a Makuta.

>>11618431161843 This is set in the Chess Game of the Gods universe. Derahk is a human turned Rahkshi; it would make sense if he still had some of his humanity left.

>>11616771161677 Fair enough. Me personally im a dark kind of person, ive thought of more... creative ways to get rid of dem onix bandits if you know what i mean to be honest i was kinda surprised at the reaction of Magic. he did save them from imminent death and it wasnt (in my opinion) all that horrible.

>>11619591161959 He disabled all the others without killing them; he didn't need to kill Silver, but he did. I'm also going with the assumption that most ponies are not used to intelligent creatures killing each other. I'll explain it more in a later chapter.

wait, so he saves their lives and is somehow the bad guy?

>>11619591161959>>11799811179981 I decided to change the fight scene around. One death didn't seem enough, so I put more in. I don't like senseless violence, but Derahk technically is a monster so I had to do something that shows that a little more.

nice story