SGT Jennings dropped into New Mombasa to take over a Covenant cruiser. When a lucky Anti-Aircraft shot takes away his ability to control his pod, he careens end-over-end into a slipspace portal, and emerges in Equestria.
Be warned, there is more cursing in the beginning then there will be later, due to an all-military environment in the beginning.
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oh man
this is pretty good so far.
i was thinking about when he stepped out of the pod there would be guns blazing, and i was like "that wouldn't be good D:"
but i like it. keep it up!
a star and thumb for you good sir.
EDIT: i think the whole ODST intro was a little bit drawn out. but that's ok, i'm a halo fan so it was fine :P
Insta-favorite, every halo story will be great someday, just you wait.
Edit: Bang bang! Who's there? My halo nerdiness that gives you a thumb up!
It pretty good, some things you can do over if you decide to edit, but its good.
this story deserves a moustache
Me gusta, broduski, write some more.
This has potential... carry on...
liked and faved, good intro but i think i sould have been a bit longer. felt a bit rushed. great job though
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It was too long? I felt the entire thing (both ODST and Equestria) was a bit rushed. The next chapter, for example, will begin with a flashback to ODST school. I will try to make it a bit shorter.
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Halo nerdiness FTW
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Like I said... very rushed in the writing.
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The mustache will be worn proudly.
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I will then. Unfortunately, I will be on an gone for the next 4-5 days, so that will impact the writing schedule significantly. Don't expect a new chapter this week. Maybe Saturday or Sunday at the earliest.
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The potential has been doubled.
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Like I said, very very rushed writing schedule. Take a look at my last story (i.e., only other story) for an example of writing when not rushed.
its a meteor!!
nope.avi
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Actually, I thought the ODST intro was too short. I thought it could use some more fleshing out. But the author already said he was rushed writing it, so I won't talk about it more.
943541 This is great except for the fact that I have to wait a week for an update. It didn't seem too rushed to me, and it seems like the start of something awesome
First good Halo crossover I've found so far
, though I really hate swearing
(But I know that can't really be helped). Got my fave 
and I'll read the next chapter after vacation.
nice chapter
UPDATE THIS NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is actually a really well written and thought out story.
I can't wait to read more.
944633 Yup. Thanks for your understanding.
953910 Yeah. I have planned out that Twilight is disapproving of the cursing native to the military environment and makes Jennings cut back on it, but the flashbacks are still full military. I tend to think that swearing is unnecessary and limits vocabulary, but I can understand it used in the military where it could be beneficial just to get the message across. "An explosively formed copper rod penetrated his chest" is less helpful when speed is necessary in comparison to "a f***** rocket hit him."
955633 Thanks.
959360 Working on it. Literally just got back from the field a couple hours ago.
964729 All good stories are well thought out. It's why I refuse to write " 'so and so' woke up in Equestra" stories because they make no sense.
Covvies are here. Shits gonna go down now.
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The plot thickens...dun-Dun-DUN!
I'm really digging the flashback. I like what I see so far, so I'll fave it.
Yay!
New chapter plus less swearing and flashbacks included. I'm definitely watching this story.
i love it. finally! a halo braced story that's not having the main cast all grim-dark and secretory.
nice story and good luck with that
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Heretic? FOR THE EMPEROR!!!!! Heretic!? BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! HERETIC!? WAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHH!!!!!!!!
20% cooler is a great song but you probably should have changed it from hands to hooves.
Also be safe out there.
Covies? In Equestria? encrypted-tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRvBbH-nuXn2wgf9cjkIiSp8NqxPEMFisyI6ylwLdXF_Ks0AUXi2Q
im surprised how calm the ponies are acting around him, you would have thought they would have been a bit more spooked about a 5-7 foot alien in armor with weapons
shit just got real
good job with the song "20% cooler". i was beginning to think nobody knew that song. anyway. im in military school right now (well, not at the moment since my parents took me for the summer.) and i just wanted to let you know that if you could see me, i would be saluting you.
FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU why can't I find one halo odst crossover with out covies in it
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Ha ha, thanks dude. Just got pinned earlier today. Where do you go?
1008106
Probably because Covies are iconic to Halo, and are good at moving a plot forward. Most of the time, this story will have very little interaction with covies. The only interactions between ponies/humans and covies will be during major plot advancements.
Permanent incarceration, that won't end well...
Nice chapter :3
Well shit, this doesn't look good. *ducks from hoof* Ha! *gets turned into a bunny* Curse you Lunian.
*Lunian* I wouldn't do that if you would stop cursing.
Why did nopony try to tell the royal guard that Jennings was trying to help?
Did he end up killing all of the invading Covenant? (Which should be capitalized, by the way)
Or did he kill most of them and left the others to the Royal Guard?
looks like he has a new ONI to deal with
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I know it moves the plot,But I mean Is I can't find one halo ODST crossover with out Covies if you know one can you tell me plz.
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There's an ODST crossover without Covenant contact... at least I think it doesn't have any.
I don't remember what it's called, though.
Permanent incarceration! That is a complete load of horseshit! Where was Luna or celestia when this happened?
well im glad i helped ... somehow
1075416
Not quite sure how my brain connected the two, but somehow your previous comment made me think of this. And I liked the possibilities it brought up. I haven't planned where this story is going in the slightest, so it's a journey for me too. And that particular summit opened some doors I hadn't thought about before. Thanks!
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OH AHHAHA Incarcerating a ODST HA bad idea.
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It's pretty interesting, and the only Covenant contact is all in his head. (That's all you're getting! No spoilers!)
Hope you enjoy!
I give that "permanent" incarceration about 10 minutes
Must. Have. Moar.
This is one of my favorite cross-overs so far. It's just so short....
I hate it when they take off there helmets