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That Brony Over There 55416

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    The long awaited sequel to Races is finally here!

    You are a distant cousin of Applejack. When your family became fed up with your lack of effort around the farm, they sent you off to Ponyville to work on Sweet Apple Acres. It was there that you fell in love. With one complication. You're in love with Applejack.

    First Published
    21st Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    23rd Jul 2012

    Comments ( 50 )

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yes!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :eeyup:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Don't be afraid to comment my faithful readers!:twilightsmile:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    There must be more on the way... yes... more... always more :pinkiecrazy:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>947429

    Well duh!  Why would I only write it as a one chapter story? I'm just stuck on a tablet right now.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh my,:twilightoops: the hangover in the morning is going to be interesting.:rainbowlaugh:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>948666 I very much agree.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Yes! Been waiting! Not really! It was just like a day!

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>948695 yeah. It was. Did you like the chapter?

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #12 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>948721 well, keep coming back! I'm happy to be back in this series.

    Yell your friends!

    :scootangel:

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Next, now! :flutterrage:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>949308 Patience, young grasshopper.

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>949606 But its so good! :raritydespair:

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #17 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    No Lesponies?!?! Blasphemy. Moar. :eeyup:

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>949612 good things come to those who wait.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #20 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952865 good! You will get the next chapter soon.

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #22 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952879

    :rainbowlaugh:

    Glad I gained a fan! Maybe a watch, for this author?

    Also, have you read Races?

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952887 yes i have, and i watched after i read the first chapter. :twilightsmile: its a good story, indeed :moustache::moustache:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952895

    To quote a certain pink maned Pegasus:

    *deep inhale* :yay: yay!

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952919 so... when should we expect the next chapter? :rainbowderp:

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952932 some time today or tomorrow. I'm writing this one on a tablet, so my normal speed is sacrificed.

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952932 also, go comment on Races!

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>952953 ahhh, I see. I *sniff* I think I can wait that long... mabey. :fluttercry:

    #29 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    You fail to disappoint! :pinkiehappy: thanks for p.m.ing me because i would have never known otherwise.

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>955772 :yay: yay!

    But what do you like about the story?

    What would you like to see?

    And tell others about this!:scootangel:

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>958778 What I want to see in the story is things going wrong, like the cousin going to the hospital from a tree accident or something, and them two coming closer because of that, and i cant really pinpoint what makes me like this story, i just do. if you wouldn't mind, pm me when the next chapter is put up, so i can read it asap. :twilightsmile:

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>958827 alright. I can work something out. Now, tell your friends!:scootangel:

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>958850 What is this friend you speak of and where can I download one? No, I'm kidding, I already told them, they just have a huge back log of stories to read, so it might be a while. :twilightsmile: and you don't have to add that, its just what I think might add 'more' to it. Anyway, pinkie promise to keep the chapters great and I'll stick around. :pinkiehappy:

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>958910 well alrighty then!

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>958922 Guess I'm sticking around. :pinkiehappy:

    #37 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>958933 I almost forgot to tell you! I take requests. If you want something, PM me with characters (descriptions required for OCs), tags, basic plot, and setting. I will make something for ya!

    #38 · Chapter 3 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>959204 well I've had this idea, I'm not that good of a writer, ill pm you the details and see if you can make anything good out of it

    #39 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    good story, but that ending is such a cliff hanger, but it's a good cliff hanger, 'cause it gets yer mind to wander and make the rest up.

    #40 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1060224

    It's not done yet. I just haven't had the chance to work on it for a while.

    #41 · Chapter 3 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1062003

    o.O i musta read that wrong then... good to hear! :D

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wait... It's a sequel to Races, right? So then... where's "Speedy" and Rainbow? :derpytongue2:

    #43 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh, there's "Speedy". :rainbowderp: That is all for now. Other then... Nice story!

    #44 · Chapter 3 · 41w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    :rainbowkiss:

    SO. AWESOME!

    Loving this man, keep it up!

    #45 · Chapter 3 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    AT first I was like :rainbowhuh:

    Then I was like :ajsmug:

    Now I'm like :pinkiehappy:

    Keep at it can't wiat to turn out.

    quick suggestion: Wonder what would happen if Big mac or one of the others found out.

    #46 · Chapter 3 · 22w, 5d ago · · ·
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    On Hiatus...


    Damn it.

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 22w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #48 · Chapter 3 · 21w, 5d ago · · ·
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    MORE! :raritydespair:

    TAKE ALL MY MOUSTACHES ANYTHING FOR MORE! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    #49 · Chapter 3 · 21w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1976716

    When I get inspired, more will come. Promise.

    #50 · Chapter 3 · 15w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA MOAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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