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So why was Rainbow glaring at our main character? Why haven't we been told his name yet? Why did he sleep for three whole weeks?(Seriously that's a huge time lapse.) FIND OUT ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON... BALL... Z!
...In all seriousness though, this is pretty good so far, and I'm interested in seeing more! ![]()
Really now? Well then I'd better keep writing!
Well, if you insist.
He slept for most of it from sedatives and pure boredom. That tends to happen when one of your ribs stabs through your spinal cord and you can't really move very much.
As for your other two questions, they'll be explained in the next chapter.
I like it so far.
(Edit) Wait, I already said that.
Uh, how do you do that "tracking" thing everyone always talks about?
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