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    Ditzy has a lot of fun in Ponyville, especially with her daughter Dinky, but sometimes Someponies are mean to Ditzy and she thinks that's not nice, she doesn't like bullies!

    A short story written in the mindset of Ponyville's, happiest mentaly handicapable pony!

    Felt like giving this story a try, it's a risk with it's style of sounding like Ditzy's conciousnous but hopefully some of you enjoy it!

    First Published
    18th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    18th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #1 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    'See author, instant like without reading'

    Will say something properly when iv actually read it :pinkiesmile:

    #2 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    like the name friend, and profile pic. going to read and will tell you what i think.

    :twilightsmile:

    #3 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    On a proper note, found a an error that is worth touching up. 'She lies to walk'

    A quaint touching story, it as it reminded of me of my primary school years a little. Good stuff :twilightsmile:

    #4 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This was very cute! Usually stories like this don't phase me that easily, but this one did. :twilightsmile:

    Good job!

    A few spelling errors where they shouldn't be. Fix those before someone bugs you about them. (besides me. XD)

    #5 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    that was amazing in my openion, short and sweet just how i like it. i wish you put an epic scene with ditzy telling those two brats off. but o well :pinkiehappy: good story. :derpytongue2:

    #6 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Not kind my vision of Derpy (I prefer her ForrestGumpish, or something like that), but still heartwarming :raritywink:

    #7 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Usually, when someone writes a story from the perspective of Ditzy/Derpy, it just... doesn't feel right.

    This, however, was great. I had a smile plastered on my face almost the entire time. :pinkiehappy:

    #8 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    so...awesome! :rainbowkiss: absolutely enjoyed this story!

    #9 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    D'awww! :twilightblush:

    So cute. I loved it

    #10 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i prefer stories like these, the cute little funny stories that should be in MLP as opposed to shipping and serious adventure stories

    #11 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Tiny spelling errors in the synopsis, but everyone makes them on the words you did, so it's all good! Favorited

    :twilightsmile:

    #12 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Aww, I haven't read anything like it in quite a while. Though I did imagine Derpy being a bit more intelligent.

    #13 · 43w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    A short story written in the mindset of Ponyville's, happiest mentaly handicapable pony!

    #14 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This is great. I was rally saddened by the fillies' taunting of Ditzy. All in all, a very touching story. :twilightsmile:

    #15 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Dam you silver spoon and diamond tiara y u mean to ditzy and dinky

    #16 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Written a bit less detailed than I would like, but over all it was cute and heart warming. :derpytongue2:

    #17 · 40w, 21h ago · · ·
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    really cute story and heart warming but kind of boring for me.

    #18 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I love stories like this, my headcanon is that Ditzy is actually a lot smarter than others give her credit for, but I loved seeing inside the thoughts of your impression of her, she is adorable

    I also like the fact that you call her Ditzy. I know most of the time when authors call her Derpy they mean well, but it always DOES seem a bit insulting.

    #19 · 34w, 20h ago · · 1 ·
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    I'm sorry but I hate Stupid Derpy stories. :ajbemused: Down voted on principle. Nothing personal.

    #20 · 15w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I liked this little story, although it might be worth your time to give it the once over. There were one or two spelling errors. :twilightsmile:

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