• Member Since 5th Nov, 2011
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Erhm. . .alright then.

Because dark and random can and will go together if you ask them nicely. :ajsmug:

I have no idea what I just read. But I think I liked it.

well.........
why the fuck not

What? What did I just read?!

..keels over.

n... what makes you tick?

Do I want to know?

Should I not know?

I'll shut up now...

........

Why does nothing make sense to me anymore?

Sequel. Now.

I... do not know what I just read.

Minor suggestion: add a scene break before the "Twilight..." part, when the narrator keels off and dies. Since you're changing perspectives to Twilight, after all.

It's been a long while since this was written, but..

WAT.
That is all.

He doesn't like
He doesn't like
Green eggs and EGGS.

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