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Because dark and random can and will go together if you ask them nicely. ![]()
I have no idea what I just read. But I think I liked it.
n... what makes you tick?
Do I want to know?
Should I not know?
I'll shut up now...
I... do not know what I just read.
Minor suggestion: add a scene break before the "Twilight..." part, when the narrator keels off and dies. Since you're changing perspectives to Twilight, after all.
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