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  • E Apples to Oranges

    Orange Sherbet is getting ready to attend her family reunion, but feels she may not belong with the Apples anymore. Set in the Manehattanverse.
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  • E Brag you Down

    Trixie's showboating skills start to get a little bothersome for the rest of the elements of harmony. So Twilight devises a plan with her friends to teach her a little humilty...with unforeseen consequences. Set in the Manehattanverse
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  • E Blossomforth with all your might

    Blossomforth has accidentally signed herself up for the Best Young Fliers competition. How will she get herself out of this without looking like a total fool? Set in Manehattanverse.
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  • E Mother shows Best

    Trixie's mother has come to Manehattan, and she's here to drag her prodigal daughter back to Canterlot and take up her house's title, whether she wants to or not! Set in the Manehattanverse.
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  • E Learning your wings

    Rainbow Dash goes back to school
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  • 10w, 3d
    Tip Jar

    So yeah, I put up a tip jar on my profile. A part of me can't help but feel this decision was petty and selfish, but with life becoming so much busier after college, I also can't help but feel my free time has become that more precious.

    I'm not the first one. Kwakerjak's getting one, RealityCheck has one, heck, Wanderer D has one and he's a moderator. So obviously this is perfectly legitimate by FIMFiction standards. Still, I would like to stress, tipping is completely optional. If I had to say one thing only, tip jars for fanworks feel to me exist primarily for an esteem boost rather than profit. Yeah, you get some extra pocket change, but the feeling of seeing that your own hobby and passion fiscally validated to have worth seems much richer than the pennies in your jar, anyone else think that?

    Even so, I'd like to put some of that money to use if only to make me feel better setting up a payment link for something you could read for free. So I'm thinking this too. I'm associated with environmental protection organizations for both my state and country. For every $5 my tip jar ends up accumulating, I'll give $1 each to both of them.

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  • 21w, 5h
    Work it out

    I've finally got a job...something easy for me, 10:30 to 7:00, and 3 km commute,  so I won't be in too much hurry. And I'm probably not going to work on writing except on holidays and weekends now.

    Well, the tasks are data verification and analysis, menial enough for me to have some thoughts to myself on occasion. So hopefully I can brainstorm a bit while working and reduce my writer's block time. Just hoping.

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  • 39w, 1d
    Blossomforth story re-edited to fit Manehattenverse canon

    Just a few tweaks here and there to help diverge Blossomforth more from Fluttershy's character. For those of you who've read it already, feel free to reread it so that it fits into the re-Hurricane Blossomforth episode.

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An ancient evil older than Equestria itself has emerged from its eons old prison, set on returning the land to a state of endless destruction and suffering. Twilight and her friends will have their bonds tested and friendship lessons learned in ways they never thought possible as they come together to combat the last remaining crafter of worlds, Ruinate, and his heralds of hatred.

First Published
19th Jul 2012
Last Modified
27th Jan 2013

Looks pretty good other then the few small grammar mistakes here and there.

shined should be shone.

Can't wait to see where this goes!



Much obliged, feel free to list any other edits needed.

Only one little gramar mistake. Whole should be hole.

Great work! you've earned a like from me!


Ok, and also, if you know any editors, artists, or groups this could fit in with, I'd appreciate it. For some reason I feel I could make the second episode's ending a little stronger....and am still looking for coverart.

in your disription, you spelled "An anicent evil older" as i assume you meant "order." i have poor word placement problems too, but i just wanted you to be aware.

>>1250756 uh, no I didn't. I implied it existed before Equestria's creation...

Capitalize the title and chapter names, that's about the only gripe I've got at the moment.

And no, I didn't hit the dislike button on this fic. I dislike bad stories.

I haven't read your story, so it goes against my principle.

I like this fic! Please write more!

I volunteer to preread your chapters to this story and help out with editing. I'm loving this fanfic so far.

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