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Twilight Velvet is ready to retire, with her last book due to hit shelves in just a couple of days. Unfortunately, not everypony is as happy with the ending as she is.

Especially not the main character.



Credit where credit is due; big thanks to my two volunteer prereaders, Goat and Regidar.

As seen on Seattle's Angels!

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Comments ( 9 )

Ooh, this is something I should read...

Hm. I don't think I've ever seen this premise before, and it was done well. Very nice, thanks for the read!

Wonderfully creepy, but I feel it would've been even better on a slower burn. Still, nice work.

reminded
https://youtu.be/HZSFCAQ7eWA
English text
The writer Goodwin was the Creator of line with the experience.
Unfortunately, all of his friends died.
But only I became his favorite character,
As I have problems in life began.

Chorus:
Star of best-selling I be
Posthumously don't want to!
The writer of the note,
I, too, you can kill!
I'm with you I'm not,
And you're not joking!

Damn Goodwin again up to something!
His fantasy persecute me!
For me hunt, followed and threatened.
People around't see what I see!

Chorus:
Star of best-selling I be
Posthumously don't want to!
The writer of the note,
I, too, you can kill!
I'm with you I'm not,
And you're not joking!

I'll be your victim I do not want!
With me, Goodwin, your things will not pass!
And the purpose of his I very clearly understand:
You, the writer Goodwin, soon not found!

Chorus:
Star of best-selling I be
Posthumously don't want to!
The writer of the note,
I, too, you can kill!
I'm with you I'm not,
And you're not joking!

Killer track smell out of my
The finale is coming steep.
The writer, so hurry up!
Stand by you behind me,
Rumpled, but a living.
To me the game was a fatal error!

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My theory, regarding this story is that, Mrs. Velvet has gained the passive ability to view past life of the dead. And somehow, ended up retelling the life story of a damned soul. What are your thoughts?

This really gave me the creeps... here's a note to all those authors out there : DO NOT, I repeat, DO NOT KILL THE MAIN CHARACTERS IN ANY STORY. You may never know when they will haunt you like what happened in Velvet's case... :pinkiesad2: xxxx

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I've killed off main characters before.
That's probably why I have eyes in the back of my head. Useful.

Ehh....... horror isn’t my jam but as a writer I’m really not a fan of never killing off characters.

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