Interesting, i will not write my though about plot because i can spoil something or whatever. Looking for more

An interesting concept. Grammar errors aside,it's a good read.

Good story, but try to keep them a bit closer to character.  I would have expected Dash to jump him when she realized he was already on his hooves and applejack having to pull her away.  They seemed to accept that he had amnesia a bit too quickly considering they wanted information from him about changelings and altogether they were a bit nicer than I would expect.  It is however still a good story.

My inner Grammar Nazi is about to commit lyrical genocide. =P

I am usually not a grammar nazi but.. Fffffffuuuuuuuuuuu!!! The mane six are all mares. Fillies are little children like 48 years old. Aaaaaaarrrrgggghhh my bwain!

Great story