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Cyberglass 1018

Joined June 2012
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    Cyberglass's Stories (1)

    • Hivemind
      Twilight discovers that the changelings have taken over Canterlot.

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    After the wedding in Canterlot, Twilight thought the excitement was over, at least for a while. But when she wakes up to find the events of the past few days were a lie, she realizes just how wrong she was. Can she and her friends save Equestria from an enemy who has already won? Or will they remain trapped in the Hivemind?

    First Published
    18th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    22nd May 2013

    Comments ( 36 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You've drawn me in with custom art. Shall read.

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Can't tell if intrigued...

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I kind of like this. Saw it on eq daily and the deviantart link.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm waiting for the moment Twilight realizes this is a illusion again.

    Then I start listening to this.

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm definitely intrigued... will watch

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    Read this on your deviantArt.  Definitely a good start to the fic, even if I'm nto a fan of Dark tagged fics.  This appears to be one of my few exceptions.  It's nice to see it here as well so I can track it easier.  Keep it up!

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Interesting, keep it coming :D

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 42w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #9 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I first saw this on DA. I'm happy I can sub to its updates now. Excellent story, not updating fast enough.

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Nice. I've been waiting for this update for ages. Good chapter.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm surprised I missed this before; it's great!

    Nothing to say on grammar or any of that other stuff either.

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy:

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What an awesome story.

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I just found you story today and there a update already. Nice Job. I can't wait for the next one.:scootangel:

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    Why the hell doesnt this have more likes?

    Really enjoying this story.

    Especially liked the Changeling Pinkie.

    Go Pee Wee! Scratch Twilings eyes out!!

    #16 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Jailbreak! Aw yeah! Poor Pee Wee's probably scared out of his feathers, though.

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    Did not. See that. Coming. I beg you, continue.

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yay, it's Star Swirl the Bearded! It IS his wing in the Canterlot Archives after all. :twilightsmile:

    #19 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 4d ago · · ·
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    In case of emergency, break glass?

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dafuq did I just read?  Did NOT see that coming.  Now I can't wait for the next chapter.

    #21 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The car has arrived:twilightsmile: Bugs will now become smears:pinkiecrazy:

    #22 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp: Whoa.

    Well that was most DEFINITELY worth the wait. Way to go, Cyberglass! Can't wait for the next chapter.

    #23 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Of course what no one else has mentioned are the two possibilities for the scroll having Twilight's cutie mark, both amazing.  First Twi has the same cutie mark as Starswirl.  (Though last chapter mentioned an uncle with the same mark so maybe things aren't quite what they seem.)  Second Starswirl essentially addressed the scroll to Twi because he knew she would need him at some point.

    #24 · Chapter 4 · 17w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I bet Celestia was thinking. I wonder what this scroll is about... :trollestia: I'll open it later.

    #25 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 8h ago · · ·
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    Hooray. :) I hope this updates more often than "My Choices: Twisted Through Time"...

    #26 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 8h ago · · ·
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    Huh, Chrysalis is only half-changeling, if I'm reading your aside correctly.

    #27 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>2005607

    Well, he did mention that he'd been to the future before. Perhaps Twilight told him about the scroll then? But he also mentioned Clover... perhaps it was her cutie mark and not Twilights.

    #28 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>2615838

    So do I. I was starting to slip into that territory, but I'm determined to reverse the trend.

    #29 · Chapter 4 · 3d, 6h ago · · ·
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    Starswirl the Bearded!?!

    #30 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 6h ago · · ·
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    Hmm... My guess is that Chrysalis isn't the half changeling, or even descended from it. Instead it's most likely Twilight or one of the other bearers, because prophecies like to do that sort of thing.

    #31 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 5h ago · · ·
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    Nice to see this updated. :)

    Also, this kind of stuck out at me:

    “Well, well,” said Star Swirl, a huge green creeping up his bearded face.

    I'm assuming you meant a huge grin?

    #32 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 5h ago · 1 · ·
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    >>2615855 Oh good! Because the situation with MCTTT causes me physical pain every time I contemplate it because of the combination of an amazing and original concept with an author who updates it once a year or less.

    Also, is it bad that I already really, really like Pupilla and think it'd be kickass if this story ended with her shipped with one of the Mane Six? Just... random thinkings that won't fit into your story, inasmuch as it's a "Dark" "Adventure".

    Also, changeling/pony integration FTW. I need to find a story like that somewhere that's written well and is also cool.

    #33 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 5h ago · · ·
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    >>2616456

    Ooh, thanks for catching that.

    >>2616468

    Yeah, I'm not going to be shipping anyone with the Mane 6. Keep an eye on Papilia, though; she's one of my favorites as well. (Granted, I like all my characters.)

    #34 · Chapter 5 · 3d, 5h ago · 1 · ·
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    >>2616535 Yup, like my character Chidi (when I get to the point that I can introduce her in "Game of Worlds") is gonna be a kick to write as well.

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 2d, 18h ago · · ·
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    her mind had decided that was enough thinking for the day, thank you very much.

    ROFL :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 2d, 18h ago · · ·
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    “Am I dead?” she asked groggily.

    “No, silly, you're doing the limbo!”

    :rainbowlaugh:

    We are literally inside our own imaginations!”

    “It seems kinda... empty,” Rainbow quipped.

    because your inside your own head. and your head is empty.:rainbowhuh:

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