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WyngsTriumphant


A brave new world, created. A line between reality and fiction, shattered.

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Spoilers for MLP Movie ahead, you've been warned.

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After a long and perilous journey, as well as an intense final confrontation, Twilight has managed to secure the staff... and finds herself trapped in a raging storm.

Yet to everyone else on the ground below, she was only gone for less than a minute before returning perfectly unscathed and even happy. Did she simply use the staff to calm the storm?

Or... did something else happen as well?

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Just a simple one-shot to illustrate my take on the movie's theme and moral. No relation or connection to any of my other stories.

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Now this was an interesting little interlude. Twilight really needed that pep talk.

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Well, well, well, look what the (blue)cat dragged in, eh? Big fan of your works, btw. :scootangel:

Anyways, thanks! That whole sequence, especially with the ambience and lighting as Twilight came down, really got my head thinking. It’s been forever since I published something, thought this would be a nice chance to dip my feet again.

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Well, it seems like you haven't lost any skill during your absence. I certainly hope you write again soon.

And I'm glad to hear you like my own stories.

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I can tell that I’m apparently still interesting by the fact that my dislike stalker is apparently still here. That’s always a good sign!

Nice little story.

That was so freakin' beautiful!!!:raritystarry::raritycry::yay::pinkiesmile:

I must say this is a remarkably well-written interlude that I felt would've made the movie much better (If they weren't so intent on keeping it under 90 minutes). This to me is more than just a fan-written interpretation of what 'could have' happened, but rather I feel it makes a remarkable tribute to the woman who helped make 'My Little Pony' into the phenomenon that it is today (Because let's face it, I don't think it was ever this popular years ago to my knowledge). To have the classic Lauren Faust appearance, to inspire with Twilight Sparkle of what she's truly accomplished despite her own mistakes, I believe it serves some poetic justice even as Twilight continues to make a few mistakes in later events (Or 'Twilighting' as it's become commonly known, courtesy of Season 9). For this segment, I applaud your efforts with your work and wish you the best in your future endeavors.

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