• Member Since 23rd May, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 24th, 2013

Skylight Swirl


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1 view, 1 like, 1 dislike, seems legit

Are you going to write about Rainbows date with soarin?

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I may just do so at some point in some form or another. Still getting used to how this site works.

And fanfiction.

And being required to have some sort of rhyme or reason to my madness...

Al of my yes!:rainbowwild:

This needs a sequel.

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A sequel or a continuation has been in the back of my head. The story itself is a prompt, but I'd love to expand on it since I've never considered Rarity x Rainbow Dash a believable paring.

This is awesome! Keep up the good work!

Raridash ship and clopfics are very rare, thank you for writing this one :)

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3A #12 · Aug 26th, 2012 · · 8 ·

Do the date with soarin lesbian stuff is horible.

I thought this was a decent story, though it was a tad short. The idea that Rarity could overpower Rainbow simply by stroking her hoof is genius, but I was sad when you didn't either have Rarity lord over her victory or explain the dynamics of the ongoing situation. The spanking also lacked detail and seemed to come to an abrupt end. A lot of people in here seem to want to see the forthcoming date with Soarin, but I think this scene has a great deal more potential than a tryst with a woefully undeveloped side character.

I'll be honest. I only came here to see Dash get spanked.

But still, well done story. :twilightsmile:

I am disappointed. I thought the title said Sexy Subtitles. There were no subtitles in this story.

6857066 It says "subtleties", hun. As in being subtle (look up the definition XD)

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That was horribly offensive to gay people.
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I liked it! A sequel would be nice, if gladly read it

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