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Jimbo 511

Joined January 2012
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    Jimbo's Stories (5)

    • The Make Me Better Boutique
      Pinkie Pie tries to cheer up Rainbow Dash after a bad day. F/F shipping

      3,495 words · 4,605 views · 185 likes · 5 dislikes
    • A Friend for Derpy Hooves
      Honey Muffin came to Ponyville to teach Derpy Hooves how to be normal; instead, they became friends.
      12,011 words · 609 views · 23 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Pinkie Pie and Applejack's Cooking Hour
      Energetic Pinkie Pie asks the long-suffering Applejack to teach her to bake.
      1,484 words · 536 views · 12 likes · 0 dislikes
    • The Escape
      Celestia orders Luna to marry a stallion she's never met; with Donut Joe's aid, Luna flees.
      22,305 words · 223 views · 16 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Batpink: I AM THE NIGHT
      5,690 words · 328 views · 6 likes · 0 dislikes
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    Celestia and Luna have many duties as the leaders of their realm, such as raising the sun and the moon; but there are other duties, while less pressing, that must also be fulfilled. When those duties require an unwilling betrothal, Luna flees the palace, afraid of summoning Nightmare Moon with the force of her rage. With the help of the commoner Donut Joe, she treks across the unforgiving landscape of Equestria, facing monsters and risking her life while forging a new friendship - but will her escape have been for nothing?

    First Published
    18th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    18th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 9 )

    #1 · Chapter 12 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·
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    HA I KNEW IT I KNEW THIS WAS A SETUP! :trollestia: The chapters were short but sweet. Enjoyed reading this!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This has got to be one of the best opening chapters I've read in years. This story simply reeks of potential, and I must say the pairing of Donut Joe and Luna is not only crazy but amazing at the same time.

    #3 · Chapter 12 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This was a great story, thanks for writing it.

    #4 · Chapter 12 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>929202

    Thank you very much!

    >>930356

    Wow, thank you very much! :) I am so glad you liked it! I wrote this fic for a contest, and they said the pairings could be anyone and Celestia or Luna, so I wanted to pick someone kind of unlikely, then make it believable! And, er, now I ship it too! LOL!

    #5 · Chapter 12 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Good, Damn good... Now I want a donut...

    #6 · Chapter 12 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Really fantastic entry here, mate!

    #7 · Chapter 12 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    To be honest, when I read the description I thought you said brothel, not betrothal. Mind you it didn't change my mind about the story.

    Besides the point, it was a good story that deserves a good thumps up! :pinkiehappy:

    #8 · Chapter 12 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Thanks for the input guys! Sad to say I didn't place in the contest, sad day! :fluttercry: But all of the runners-up get a Steam game, so that's nice! :pinkiehappy:

    >>934342

    Thank you! Haha, I craved donuts while I wrote it!! They just sounded so tasty...

    >>1009620

    Thank you very much! Sorry we didn't win anything though! :raritycry:

    >>1016812

    Haha, thanks! :rainbowlaugh: I appreciate the sentiment! ... even if it's not a brothel story, LOL! :rainbowderp:

    #9 · Chapter 12 · 41w, 19h ago · · ·
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    My word.

    Your usage of the Old Tongue is delightful!

    I had to actually come and comment on that -- so many ponyfics just mangle it horribly, but your usage? :heart: :heart:

    Fills me with so much :yay:

    The story was a delightful read that made me smile when I was finished. Thanks for sharing it with us! :)

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