Fluttershy is alone for the day in her cottage. With nopony around to interrupt or eavesdrop, she takes the opportunity to have some fun...
So good. Keep up the good work!
but the way you said it make me think other wise
i was correct
You know it's not what it seems like, but it's still hilarious! Also, Twilight using chatspeak was unspeakable!
This, is the best thing ever!
I take it Legends of Equestria is based on League of legends?
I like how the story actually went on past the "See, it isn't what you thought it was!" punchline. Good job.
I thought this'd be one of those notactuallyclopfics with the pun dragged way too long out. Glad to see it wasn't, great fic.
Hehe that was a fun story to read.
It first I was like: "Clopfic"
But then I was like: "Twilight and Fluttershy game geeks!"
As a long player of Unreal Tournament I approve this story.
Euphemisms aside this was hilarious, faved.
Okay, yeah, that was cool.
I haven't touched League of Legends in a while, but yeah, I can relate.
Very well done.
A classic image to describe this fic
This was amazing, you totally need to do an epilogue or whatever of Twilight finding out it really is Fluttershy. Liked and favourited.
this is GREAT! you deserve a fav
This is like, what, the fifth story that did the exact same thing with the exact same joke? I bet this will get featured.
It was kinda funny, I guess. The ending was, anyway.
The beginning joke of it seeming like masturbation dragged on too long for my tastes, but who am I to say, I can't write for crap. Very well done, good sir/madam. Good story.
I totally saw that coming!
I can see Fluttershy being a gamer. More of a rpg gamer, but fighting?! Haha, maybe she does have secrets.
Loved it. Great timing and great outcome.
When I went into this, I had no idea what to expect, but the truth totally blew my mind. XDD Kudos to you, you've earned a fave!
The way it was heading, I thought it would be something like this. I was waiting for the twist that I knew was coming.
5 mustaches and a bonus Yay!:
>>927753927753 yes. yes it is.
Wow, i'm perverted...
This needs a sequel. Bring in gamer Luna for voice/gaming lessons.
Oh my... at first i thought... uhm... Fluttershy clopping and i was like:
Then, when it was only a videogamelike Quake, i lol'd hard!
End of the day:
Ugh dammit, you took the name I was gonna use.
SO FABULOUS :D
NEEDS SEQUEL NAOW
I'M LIKE FLUTTERSHY BUT SHIT!
And I thought Celestia could troll ponies.
I never saw it as that kind of story when I clicked on this. But I was pretty curious as to what direction this story would take, and what I found was definitely fun to read. Fluttershy does sound like she would be that kind of gamer. Great read.
wait which game was she playing
I knew that you wouldn't take the story in the direction you were heading, but this was a twist I didn't expect. Now It seems so obvious, Fluttershy a gamer. Having Twilight be the mad player was the perfect touch, she is the type to develop an addiction
Very well written
Take my praise, my compliments, and all my WIN!
Love it! Keep up the good work!
Hilarious! If only Twilight and Fluttershy knew...
You would be correct. Legends of Equestria was (loosely) based of LoL, which I play avidly. I'm not sure why everyone keeps thinking it's a fighting/fps game. Anyway.
>>928028928028 Maybe in the sequel. (If there is one).
I am aware of that. This was actually written in around 3 and a half hours when I was barely awake, and I just decided ah, what the hell, might as well post it. Did NOT expect this amount of reception. As for featurebox, I have my fingers crossed.
>>927858927858 Maybe. Maybe.
I heard it's a free game, am I correct? Because if so, I gotta try it someday.
Completely free. There are skins for the champions you can buy, and you can choose to unlock champs with real money, but you can get very highly ranked and get a huge amount of fun out of the game without paying a cent. If you want to try, I can PM you my Summoner Name (Gamertag).
Hmm, sounds interesting, but it'll have to wait until I get back to my home and get my new laptop set up.
But go ahead and send your name if you want.
I take it Fluttershy plays as Master Yi?
Finally, someone gets it. Also, fun fact:
The song she listened to was originally this before I changed it at the last minute.
I laughed so hard. Fluttershy's best LoL player... Or LoE, I guess.
Like a boss
My only criticism is that with this type of story done well, you have the reader going, "Oh, I have such a gutter mind, it was perfectly innocent the whole time!"
Except that becomes impossible when you write a line like this;
"The appendages would need to be as limber as possible, what with all the... activity they would soon be getting. Unicorns might have magic, but sometimes, you just need the touch of a real pony, Fluttershy thought, smiling. Although I’m sure Twilight makes due nicely... The pegasus shook her head. Come on, Fluttershy, she scolded. You can ask Twilight about her tactile preferences later. For now, focus on the task at hoof."
That just makes it blatantly obvious that you're the one with the gutter-mind, (you're just going to run with it) because the line doesn't even MAKE SENSE in its innocent context.
Might be just my opnion though.
Yeaah, I may have laid it on a bit thick there. Although I thought it at least made some sense, considering Twilight would use her magic to manipulate the keyboard/mouse. I dunno. Not sure if you read my previous comment, but this was all entirely written between 3 and 5 am on a whim, so some parts of it are probably not up to my usual standards for quality. I hope you enjoyed it anyway.
Like I said, it was my ONLY criticism. The rest made me laugh hard enough that I had to cover my mouth so I didn't wake up sleeping roommates XD
I have to say I got mislead, just like "cloudedguardian" said. But I have to admit that I'm thankful I kept reading, this was cool.
Can't say more to that, except for "great job" (but let's face it, you already know).
Also, I thought it was a perfect amount of misleading. It starts out as a "duh, this is going to twist into gaming or something" because it is a pretty often used set up, then you bring in those lines along with the computer (instead of some sort of console) and you might think it could be taken back to clopping, as the rating fades from your mind to make room for bad thoughts, and then the reveal slaps you in the face and tells you to get your mind out of the gutter.
It seems one person was expecting clop (okay, most of us were) and has no sense of humour. C'mon, all that build up made the punchline that she was a gamer AWESOME!!
And now for the coveted SIXTH moustache! ()
This is...surprisingly familiar. My team got owned by her in Tribes: Ascend a few weeks ago.
Actual post-game chatter from the match (names have been altered slightly):
player1: How'd someone with a name like "Fluttershy" get five times as many kills as anyone else?
player2: Flutterrage!!! :D
Fluttershy: I'm not raging, I'm just being assertive.
She would play technician on gen, call in supply drops constantly, and still somehow end up with twice the K/D of everyone.
I'm a magical winged pony. I ain't gotta explain shit.
this was freakin hilarious.
Glad you enjoyed!
Tired joke is tired, but the whole thing is redeemed with Twilight acting like some XBL jackass. Bravo.
Though I must ask...
"There was a rush of air as the tower’s fans roared to life, throwing Fluttershy’s mane into a pink, silky tangle. "
What kind of fans are those?! And here I thought the original 360 had annoying fans.
Some full-tower cases have some pretty crazy side fans. I exaggerated a little for comedic effect, but my friend owns one that comes pretty close airflow-wise.
What server does Fluttershy play on again...
great twist :)
I can see fluttershy being all as she pwns a noob.
I really dislike people who can't type straight in games. I didn't really think twilight would be one of them.
You know, due to combination of the picture and summary, I almost didn't pick it up. I'm glad I did though.
Hah! This was brilliant.
Very Funny. Why couldn't summoners be more like Fluttershy? After a year and a half, I rage quit League and uninstalled. It's like a black hole negativity, whiners every game. It's worse than Rarity's whining.
Ooooooh shit son!
This was great.
>>938149938149 I DEMAND CLOPPERSHY!! ALL MY DISLIKES!!!
Would be totally hot, though...
Eh, given my preferences, I'd rather it be a different pony. Only my friends know which mare I'm referring too. I'll let everyone else just guess.
I would love to be a Parasprite on the wall to witness the scene of Twi finding out it was Flutters all along.
Flaming Twilight would seem like a mild simmer compared to the thermonuclear detonation she'd unleash.