Insta fav. Insta fav. Insta fav. Insta fav.

Insta fav.

Celestia damn track button, why you making me click you so much today?

Awesome work, im liking this side of Spike very much.

>>5223552235 Haha, thanks. it's my first story on here, so i'm kinda new

>>5271152711 Keep up the good work.

>>5238052380 thanks, i'm glad you liked it :)

I applaud you, sir. This had to be one of the funniest and most amusing Spike-centered stories I've read in a while. For the most part, I think it's pretty much spot on with his characterization in the show as well. Overly vivid imagination due to being a baby dragon. Every single time you jumped back to the private-eye character, I couldn't help but smile all the way through.

Your style is great and this might just be because the story itself grasped my attention throughout, but I've hardly found any noticeable errors, either. Altogether, a really great job on this one, I hope to see more from you! Also, lemme congratulate you on that EqD feature, you most certainly deserved it!

This was fun to read- kind of reminds me of Pinkie's 'Detective Noir' mode in Sparkle's Law. Was that the inspiration? If not, you should totally go and read that.

But this is great by itself :)

>>5735157351 Oh na i haven't read that. But i'm sure i would enjoy it. I'll check it out. Thank you

>>5734857348 Oh thank you so much. I have to give credit to the "Calvin and Hobbes" creator because much of the style came from him. But thank you, i made up all the crappy puns and one liners myself though

I remember the exact C&H comic that inspired this story.  You captured Calvin's fantasy through Spike very well.  The only problem was that I knew exactly how it ended since it followed the same plot.  Anyways, good job.

This was hilarious.

>>5738257382 Yea, that was the downside to it. But i hope you enjoyed all the pony themed quotes and one-liners

>>5738857388 thank you kind sir!

You got spike's character down nicely~

INSTA FAV

I approve of Calvin and Hobbes Pony crossovers at first I was like but then I was like

Listen to this while reading it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_IImfpAIcI

Calvin and Hobbes is my favorite everything, so a crossover just made my day

Loved it

Oh ma, I loved this. I remember the very Calvin and Hobbes strip this comes from. I always did like those lapses into noir territory. Very well written and very funny!

>>5740257402 Thank you Plok

>>5741057410 And i was like when i read your comment

>>5745457454 Nice choice good sir

>>5746157461 Haha, it was my childhood, so i gotta give it props

>>5771757717 Thank you, i love all his alter egos

I did not expect this story to be amazing, no offense, when i read it. But I was oh so wrong. This is one of the best stories I have read. Spike Steel needs another case. Soon

>>5790857908 haha, i wasn't planning on it, but i'll see what i can do

Great piece of detective noir from head to toes, then what was really happening was

SO!

AWESOME!

>>5800558005

I reviewed your fic in my last webcast. Launch another dozen reads your way or so.

>>6509965099 Whoa! thanks. Do you have a link?

>>6518465184

Sure

Atmiddely it is a little short, but I didn't want to give any spoilers, and unlike Cupcakes or My Little Dashie I didn't end up talking about morality in any way.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9Mf8ZWzy6I&feature=channel_video_title

>>6521365213 Thanks for the review! Yeah, i agree with most of what you said, i'm kinda new to Pony Stories so my writing gets geared more broadly. But thank you again, i always welcome constructive criticism

>>6528765287

Hey no problem. Put out another good fanfic and I'll probably give it a review. Who knows maybe misadventures of friendship will merit that review when I get around to reading it/

>>6530465304 Haha, maybe. It's not that popular, and it's written originally, so don't get too freaked out

A very good fanfic that I simply couldn't click away from. Wish I had your talent.

>>8513185131 Thanks, and it just takes practice You can do it

Haha, I'm glad I found this!

*giggle giggle giggle giggle*

Calvin and Hobbes meets My Little Pony??

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