One day, while deep in thought during a flight, Fluttershy finds herself flying over Sweet Apple Acres. She ends up helping Applejack harvest her apples, but she's got something that she's having trouble getting off her chest.
(My first pony fanfic! Originally posted on EqD back in March-April 2011. I'm pretty sure it was the first AJ/FS fic on EqD, a fact I like to tout because I am silly.
Being as it's my first work, I think I've improved quite a bit since then, but I'm still quite pleased with how it came out as a whole.)
I remember reading this a long time ago, and one of the first MLP fanfics I read. Great to see it on here.
This was one of my original favorites. I was wondering when it'd be on the site.
Cute. On to chapter 2......
Is this new or do you have it posted somewhere else? It seems kinda familiar.
It's too cute, I can't handle it!
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I originally posted this to Equestria Daily around late March of last year. I'm gradually going through my old stories from there and bringing them over to here.
I really liked this story. It's a sweet, non sad tale that really pulls the heart. Thanks for posting it here.
There really isn't enough Appleshy here.
Very sweet; a little fast-paced for my usual taste, but it works for this story. I'll be sure to check out your other stories as you bring them over to FIMFiction.
Loved the background Rainbow Pie
What a sweet and wonderful story.
"See, Rainbow?" Pinkie said, patting Rainbow on the shoulder. "I TOLD you we weren't the only ones!"
I didn't see that coming but
939626 I agree, it's my favorite pairing, the most probable one too in my opinion. Have you ever noticed that Fluttershy tends to hide behind Applejack a lot?
Goddamnit, I don't even know why I'm reading this. I hate sappy romance stuff, but...
This story is sweet enough to cause diabetis, dude.ö You just earned yourself a new follower.
This was ssoooo cute
Oh and at the last sentence of Chapter 4, *bangs head on desk multiple times*
So close yet, so far without running into something that RD wasnt a lesbian
oh well
1004679 I do notice that a lot.
Beautiful chapter. I could see Fluttershy lying to spend more time with AJ.
OMG!!! RainbowPie is one of my fav pairings!!! Love It!!!
AHA! I found this again, read it back before i got an account here on FIM-Fiction and now i can thumbs up it again. (Not sure if it stacks)
Any case finding this means i am prolly running out of stories again, this time with an account instead of reading just about every EQD shipping story.
It was quite lovely to get to reread this, it is as adorable the second time as the first.
Great job.
Adorbs abound. This was so cute. The AJ/Flutters confession is somewhat fast-paced but I don't really see that as a fault or a flaw, more along the lines of 'that is simply how it written'. The rest of the story progresses fine, which helps this make for an entertaining read.
Fave'd for a fun story.
That was fluffier than a obese baby bunny that bathes in fabric softener everyday, lovely.
Good work.
laughed and loved that last sentence.
good fic.
The paragraphs are too long, in my opinion. But that won't stop me from reading this awesome story!
This is the first appleshy shipping I have read and I like it. The pairing makes sense and the story was well written. Well done
This is definitely the fluffiest story I have read in quite some time.
^ Agreed.
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Is this not on EqD?
I don't actually know which was posted to that site first...
I'm stuck in between flutterdash or appleshy!!!
I love twipie, but where does rarity go???
I could've been a rarijack...
Then I read this..................
YES!!!
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WHAT TO DO???
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I'm not positive, but I know my story went up back in late March/early April 2011. I think the first comment was even saying that they'd never seen the ship before.
Love it. The speed and transitional speed was perfect. The smoothness was amazing. The scene description was not over whelming and not under done. It was bloody cute. If this was your very first story then you need to become a published writer so I can buy your books. You get a 10 out of 5 for awesomeness and fluffyness. Keep up the good work.
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A'ight.
Well, whatev. I'm always interested in Appleshy!
AWESOME STORY!!!! I AM SOO LOVING IT SO FAR!!!!!! U R A GREAT AUTHOR!!!
I THINK I MAY SWITCH TO AN APPLESHY FROM A FLUTTERDASH!!!!!!!!
GO APPLESHY!!!!!
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!
I TOTES LOVE APPLESHY!!!!!!!
FOREVER!!!!
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Hope like heck they all fall in love with each other?
This was so cute I died!
I'm a ghost btw....
My two favorite ponies together! Yes!
I would change the OK to alright. It sounds more like Applejack that way.
This is my first Appleshy fic that I've ever read. I decided to give this shipping a chance, and I think it was worth it!
This is not my favorite pony shipping, of course, but I think that should I ever run across another Appleshy again, I won't argue with it! I'm basically saying that I liked it.
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Awsome story! I'm allways impresed by how people can write things Apple Jack say so well! But that is maybe becuse of that it is impossible for me to write Apple Jack's lines in such a way in my fanfic's, becuse of that english isn't my nativ language, but a language all kids in our country learn to speak and write at least some what understandebal for someone with english as nativ language in school.
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You are SO right! and
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...... A ghost
This world needs more appleshy/flutterjack.
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I saw that too and was like hey! Oh other ship I like! Though I like TwiDash a liiittlllee more lol
My name is the first and last word of this quote Wowie lol
Oop there I am again sksksk
#Appleshy Forever