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marcyfly's Stories (2)

Through Those Eyes
The ponies, surroundings, and images of the pony world through the crooked eyes of the grey mare.
5,445 words · 385 views · 14 likes · 0 dislikes
Friends in the Sky
A short story of the first few minutes of Luna's banishment to the moon. What Celestia didn't know, was that Luna wasn't left alone on the moon.
1,315 words · 80 views · 3 likes · 1 dislikes

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Through Those Eyes by marcyfly

Tragedy Dark Adventure Human

I know of something that most ponies don't know. I try to tell them the truth behind our "magical" world, but they all laugh and continue to think it's another one of those days I haven't taken my meds. I can't help seeing these visions through these crooked eyes, and I know they're true, because I am the only one in this world to remember the experience of the making of our world. Or so I thought.

Visions Through Crooked Eyes · 3rd Aug 2012

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Someone Who Understands · 9th Aug 2012

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The Pursuit · 13th Aug 2012

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Making Sense · 21st Aug 2012

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The MIssing Piece · 21st Dec 2012

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5,445 words total

First Published
5th Aug 2012

Last Modified
21st Dec 2012

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Wlah

#1 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 4d ago ·

Are you sure this should be rated everyone? The theme doesn't seem to warrant a "for kids" label imho.

Prisoner 24601

#2 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 3d ago ·

Impressive. and original, I might add. Not many people do stories from Derpy's point of view. I'm exited to see more from you. Total score: four happy pinkies. :pinkiehappy:

Farsight

#3 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 3d ago ·

Wonderful story so far, I hope to see more in the future! So I'm assuming since Derpy/Ditzy has MEMORY of all this... Does she 'obey' the Princesses of Equestria like everypony, or not? Is she immortal, or just very old? Was her clumsiness in sending stuff crashing down on Twilight an accident, or an assassination attempt?

Also, HERE'S DERPY! :derpyderp1: :derpyderp2: :derpytongue2: