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Azure_Keys
Just a pony who wrote some horrible stories.
Azure_Keys
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Hoh boy, 25 thousand words in a single chapter.
well this stays true to the movie ill give it that much but why the hell did you put macintosh as the one who had to die why......, also why did you not make a part for fluttershy?????
Hmm... a repaint of star wars in MLP isn't that bad I suppose, good enough to mark for reading again, but at the same time, I almost wish there was more MLP and a bit less star wars... it's like the MLP characters were merely acting out parts in a movie. I would think they'd behave differently than that in a more accurate one, but hey, it's fanfiction.
ok I want to say three things, first why did you change Wedge´s firstname into Skybucker but kept the Antilles?
Second with Nigthmare Moon as Darth Vader how is it possible that twiligth and rarity "escaped" their mother.
and last why didn´t you use the royal sisters as Emperor/Yoda, maybe Sombra as Vader to circumvent point two of my list and Zecora as Obi-Wan.
Still nice story, will get faved now and then on to the next one.
May the Force be with you.
This wasn't too bad. Roll credits:
Maybe add a line under this so we know the intro is done?
Also try and find some way to let readers know of scene changes in an obvious manner, like putting the cutie mark of the new character above the paragraph
"It wasn't my fault, ma'am,"
Twilight is a female. Sir is for males.