Hmm..

Interesting concept!

Only thing I must ask:

Wat the buck is a kirin?

Lol but good story.

I will fav and follow, and you earned a like! :D

~Rosalynn~

you got me fav like love

>>914195914195 It's like a horse... but with scales. I'll let you put two and two together.

>>914293914293

*thinks*

OHH MY GOD

HOLY...

AWWWHHHHHHHHH!!!!

*dies*

Dat's so cute

Awwwhh....

WAit a minute...

...Rarity's a pedophile...

LOL NONONO IM KIDDING!! xD

Sorry fans of Rarity.

I like her too, I just.. I had to...

Awwwhhh... Spikity....

~Rosalynn~

>>914307914307 not exactly the reaction  I was expecting, but okay. And actually, the ship is called Sparity, but whatevs. Glad you like it, And I'm excited to see all of the positive impact this has gotten just in the first day.

>>914723914723

Lol I wasn't being serious about the whole "Pedophile" comment..

It was a kiinda a joke

Sorry if it sounded serious

But yeah, I really like it

and ohh yeah...

it IS Sparity..

^///^

~Rosalynn~

awsome job please hurry up with all the oter chapters and id be happy to edit them for you

Why is Twilight the Ponyville librarian if she lives in Canterlot?

>>914971914971. I myself am an editor  so I don't need help, but thanks for the offer.  

>>915024915024 She's the former librarian, as explained in my trilogy, and she lives in the castle now.

>>914776914776 It's alright! and no need to be embarrassed, I used to call it Spikirar... yeah...

>>915257915257 actually, Kirin are seen more as a deer than a horse or, in this case, pony. sorry about correcting you if that's what i did, but im a huge mythology nut. just a quick question, but can the kirin in this story command lightning?

>>915355915355 sorry, but I've only ever heard of them in a Sparity fic, so yeah. And no she can't. but when she's an alicorn she'll have pretty kickass powers.

>>915257915257

Lol yeah.

I inda suck at some shipping names

Oh well though! :3

Good story so far...

ONly thing I could think of when it said Pinkie's daughter's name?

ONLY PINKIE!

Pinkie WOULD name her daughter Fudgie...

Lol

~Rosalynn~

Good story.

I COMMAND YOU TO WRITE MOAR. please?

WAit... She's pregnant?!

Did you ever somewhat say that in the chapter?

If you did, I musta missed it.. cuz I'm stupid..

And... are AJ and Fluttershy married?

Or just living together..?

Or married?

And nice Trollestia in there

Lol

Again, great story, interesting concept..

And oh... about how old are the mane six, in revelation to another adult pony in the show?

~Rosalynn~

>>917790917790 I didn't actually say it, but waddling, being uncomfortable, it's all there. And they just live together because one of my otp's for this show is FlutterMac. Put the pieces together. There you go.

And as for the age thing, I like to think that they're about 19 in the show, end of the trilogy ending five years later, and then this is eighteen years after that, so they're about the same age as the Cakes in the show.

>>917854917854

Oh yeah x.x

Ha-derp I feel stupid :3

And ohh...

Another ha-derp-i-feel-stupid moment for Rosalynn!

That's like 5 in one day!

Yaaay!

lol.

and as for the age thing: Ohh.

Alright.

That makes sense :D

~Rosalynn~

Oh I can't wait for the next chapter! Very well written, they seem pretty in character, the daughters definitely seem like they are like their mothers, and how did I know you were going to put a Trollestia in there

Why the hell isn't this on EQD?

>>920854920854 thank you so much! Originally, this was just going to be about Lilac, but I ran out of ideas for that half-way through the prologue, so I thought, "Use all the mane six's kids!" And I'm happy how this is turning out. And really, you think this is EQD material? thanks!

>>921156921156 Definitely EQD material. Also...you know your a noob when it takes you 5 minutes to find the "reply" button...

LOL!

When Pinkie and her daughter broke the forth wall..

She Ca-raazy.

haha

And... she alsready lost one sibling?

Who?

And can you clear something up for me?

Who is who's child?

I know Twilight Sparkle is Lilac Sky's mother,

And Rainbow is CloudStorm's mother...

But can you like make a list for me of who is who's kid?

Sorry if it's a burden-- you don't have to-- I was just wonderin'

~Rosalynn~

O.O

>>922841922841

sure:

Twilight/Oc-Lilac

Dash/Soarin-Cloudstorm, Flamesoar, baby that I haven't named yet.

Fluttershy/Big Mac-Apple Tart, Apple Blossom, Meadow Lark

Rarity/Spike-Ruby Gleam, Amythist Shine

AJ/One night stand-Apple Seed

Pinkie/Caramel-Fudgie, Sprinkles

And as for the lost sibling, all will be revealed later... Okay, fine. Fluttershy had a miscarriage. Did I just make you cry? Good.

>>923381923381

Oh thanks! Haha :3

I'll save this for reference :D

and...

Fuh...fuh....

Flutershy

POOR FLUTTERSHY!

SHE DOESn'T DESERVE THIS MISTREATMENT!!!

lol.

no but seriously

~Rosalynn~

Yay new chapter. Why so many dislikes

>>939354939354 now now. people can have opinions. Besides, the positive feedback I've gotten outweighs the negative.

>>939489939489 I was just a little surprised. Keep up the  great work

> I apologize for the tears I cause

Oh shit...

>Fluttershy coughed violently.

NU. DON'T YOU DARE.

>Cure

YES

>cure was, "blood of the first born."

NONONONONONONO

A few paragraphs later...

>>942630942630 Sorry! But I had to! The story won't go anywhere for another two chapters and I wanted to put something! I sorry, but it needed to be done. If it helps, I felt awful for killing her. I curled up in a ball and cried for ten minutes straight.

>>942748942748 YOU HORRIBLE PERSON!!! DISLIKE, UNWATCH, UNFAVORITE.

GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR.

Or keep my like, favorite, and watch because this story is too awesome XD.

And I can't really yell at you since I killed Pinkie Pie in my story...in the first chapter...rather dramatically...

>>943896943896 hypocrite. And I am not a sir, I am a miss. So good day to you! also, ponies. and I already told you that I feel horrible!

>>943967943967

I sorreh, miss.

you killed fluttershy? pits of Tartarus for you

>>945820945820 please don't be angry... it was either kill her or Dash

Alright, vote time. Who wants me to re-write chapter five where she doesn't die?

>>946363946363 Not me. Even thought Fluttershy best pony. It makes it more interesting.

So...

Spike X Rarity

Fluttershy X Big Macintosh

Ranbow Dash X Soarin'

Orion X Twilight Sparkle

Pinkie Pie X ???

AppleJack X ???

Who AJ and Pinkie's Stallions? I must know.

>>947454947454 Pinkie's is Caramel

AJ had a one night stand, because I was too lazy to come up with a name.

>>947591947591 So, she hooked up with a guy, hes unknown. Uhm, did he marry her and leave her, did he die, or did they never date?

>>947643947643 I'll expla it later in one of my other stories later, but for now, here's the short version:

AJ was feeling really down so she got drunk at a bar, hooked up with a guy, and never saw him again. Four weeks later, she discovered that she was pregnant. Any other questions?

>>947753947753 Nope, but a picture.

Image: http://www.ponibooru.org/post/view/79895?search=apple_cider

>>947769947769 No picture showed up. Perhaps you could send it to me in a pm.

O.K. (Didn't show up for me either.)

I vote keep chapter 5 the same. Yeah she dies but it makes the story interesting. It could also add potential epic rage outbursts during the fight or whatever from her daughter.

>>965194965194 Interesting idea. I might just have to use that! Thanks. Chapter six would be up by now, but as I'm extremely lazy- wait! no! I'm busy with marching band right now , ansmd won't have time to write for a little while. Sorry about that...

>>965897965897 Lol, for some reason ideas like to flood through my mind. My friends think I'm really weird sometimes

What instrument to you play? I used to play clarinet when I was nine.

>>966107966107 I play flute, piccolo, and oboe, but I can't actually march yet because I'm too young, so I help by lugging equipment around the bleachers and feild during games. I'm a band aide. get it?

>>966141966141 xD

Elvis approves of their daughters shipping.

However Elvis says that BronyDerp117 is mainly TwiDash.

Elvis has now left the building.

>>973300973300 I knew that my most faithful reader would complete the whole thing! Congratulations, because for doing so, you get an Internet cookie! (::) It's chocolate chip. Twi Dash is okay, but I just think AJ and RD are just so similar, that it's impossible for them not to be together...

Well by brothers and sisters... today is a sad day for brony kind. Justin Bieber is a brony, and he's trying to do brohoofs on the Internet. we're all doomed.

>>973343973343 The tweet was fake. It was just somebody trying to fuck with us.

>>973343973343 Most faithful reader? I will gladly accept your cookie and give you a brohoof. *brohoof*

Also to your second part...

Image: http://i.imgur.com/A4oLm.jpg

>>973359973359 phew. thank Celestia! thanks for clearing that up for me, but now I feel like an idiot...

Elvis

she gonna make her life a living hell aint that right Elvis

>>975778975778 yup. just haven't figured out how to do it yet...

Elvis should be a pet's name here :o

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice chapter

they did IT

Dun dun duuuuuunnnnnnnn  

>>10089511008951 oh ho ho! (Insert creepy, pervy smile here)

>>10090641009064

Lol hehe

I love how casually Ruby went from reading the diary, to wanting to kill her too.

Also, Lilac, be quiet dammit!

Also just to clear my confusion:

AppleSeed(somedude)Cloudstorm(Soarin)?

>>10091621009162 precisely. And she can't help it if she's loud, it's his fault!

>>10098891009889 So...um....does she take after her mother....with the loudness...

>>10099641009964 uh. yeah. hehehe...

>>10132961013296 I just thought of the funniest conversation that could have happened when Twilight announced she was pregnant.(I'm too lazy to make it sound story-ish so it'll just be a cheap list like thingy xD)

Twilight: "Girls, I have something to tell you. I'm pregnant!"

5 others:" Three months"

Twilight: "How did you know? Wait...you guys didn't hear me or anything, did you? "

Applejack:"Ah'm pretty sure all of Ponyville did."

Twilight: ""

>>10134151013415 but she was living in Canterlot at that point... but that is pretty hilarious! sorry 'Twi, but it's true.

>>10134931013493 She was?

My memory fails me yet again.

HOLY CELESTIA!.... LILAC IS TWILIGHT'S DAUGHTER?! *slowpoke.jpeg* *Sarcasm*

x3 No, no but seriously.

Lilac being pregnant ups the drama scale.  

I can already think of a few bad endings to this..

~~~

Great story.

Oh, and if I may say, I don't care if the chapters are "short".

In fact, part of me likes it better that way.

That way, in my opinion, viewers/ readers don't loose attention as easily! :D

Anyway,

Continue Writing, and i'll continue reading!

~Rosalynn~

HOLY CELESTIA! AND LUNA! AND CADANCE!

You used my OC

Skate Bluestar approves.

>>10146161014616 Let me just tell you right now, I have no intention of killing Lilac's daughter... or son... haven't decided yet. I already killed Fluttershy, that would just be cruel.

>>10146831014683 told you I would. sorry she's not in for too long, I was trying to spin a glorious tale in my head, and managed to squeeze her in just for you.

>>10147241014724

Oh you're not?

*deep breath of relief*

Ohh thank Celestia, I was getting worried there...

Anyway, keep writing and i'll keep reading, just like I said before! :D

~Rosalynn~

>>10147411014741

Now I must make a "This is 100% Skate Bluestar Approved" image.

you horrible person bring fluttershy back please

im very twiluna and wonder if elvis would have been a brony. cried a few times during the chapter when anything reminded me of fluttershy why why did she have to die. im trying very hard not to hate you twilightsparkleisbestpony since this story is so good

but its very hard

holy celestia doctor sheldon cooper ......big bang theory right if im right i want 2 internet cookies

>>10213831021383. THANKYOU! FINALLY SOMEONE!  (::) (::) two cookies!

no thank you i love internet cookies theyre so yummy

should be unstable if it sheldon

How did I JUST manage to catch this?

Skate's mane is a deep blue with a purple streak, not completely purple. Just a little nit pick.

By the way, who's Night Star?

Nice new cover image! I saw it when scrolling through my favorites to check my friend's story. So who are they in order?

>>10429351042935 top left, Apple Seed, top right, Cloud Storm, middle left, Lilac, middle right, Ruby, Bottom left, Apple Tart, bottom right, Fudgie.

Keep up the great chapters twilightsparkleisbestpony cause they are great ! Been reading this story since the beginning and I haven't posted any comments cause I didn't make an account til recently! Hope you continue making a lot more chapters!

Also, Elvis thinks you're awesome :D

You killed Lyra.....

Wonder how the whole father of Discord thing works out tho.

Poor Lyra

Its so weird how you killed her in the new chapter the day after I published a chapter of my story where my OC is talking to Lyra and Bon Bon, who were really excited about getting married. Wow, I find that really weird

Chapter was short and sweet, however, where the hell did Geolo come from?

Damn school making me wait to read story updates

Why did you have to kill off lyra and especially the way she died

You got 6 female teenage Alicorns. Some emotional drama might suffice.

Nooooooooo!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!!

Aw come on!

:( Writers block is a terrible thing, it's a shame it happened to you here :( Please! Have your friend continue the story!

Let your friend continue it

DAMMIT!

Tell your friend to continue it! Hell, I'll continue it it your friend doesn't want to! (And of course if I get permission)

o come on

can i have link to your friend so i can wait patiently

Awww i was totally looking forward to it...

MAKE YOUR FRIEND CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!