Octavia is tired of being criticized by ponies who do not understand her music. This drives her into insanity. In an attempt to quiet the ponies down, she 'removes' each of the offenders, one by one. Will anypony escape the crazed musician?
This was inspired, as lamely as it may sound, by an internet meme. So it was placed in the random category along with dark.
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Wow... Octavia went crazy...
Though I am curious what was wrong with her performance. Was she too fast, slow, flat. I find it rude of both Vinyl and Lyra not to critique her on why she was 'off'. Though Octavia's reaction was... well, Pinkamina crazy.
Not a bad fic...
It is really good, although I think she snapped a little too quickly. Could use some more detail, but I doubt I could do better. 8/10 a joy to read
I give you points for a nice Tavi snap, though it felt a little rushed at times I liked it overall.
The story is even better when you've seen the meme it's based off of.
But more detail would be nice.
That is actually really awesome.
I love it, and there's no grammatical or spelling errors that I saw.
And the ending line was beautifully well played, and I can totally see Octavia doing something like this if she ever snapped.
I hate it.
Simply because Lyra died.
lol very uhum, different but good
the title refers to that unplayable music or flander's theme?
That ending was amazing
914758
It's FlanDRE, not FlanDER.
Death Waltz is an amazing song, too. Great job on this.
"With the instrumental bow in hand I carefully made my way towards Scratch's room."
um, I think you meant "in hoof". Ponies don't have hands.
But otherwise.... while shaky on premise, it was... um, nice.
Dayum...
How exactly is a cello bow able to cut through a pony's neck?
914524 That. Also, now I want to hug Vinyl... *shivers at the thought of what happened to her*
Vinyl
Anyways, that was a great ending, gave me chills. Nice work
i could see you rewrtiting this into a pretty awesome series...where tavi and vinyl are together, but tavi kills people without vinyl knowing.. and when she finds out shit hits the fan....
but since you KILLED best ponies...
one physically
the other mentally
i have to say..this was not one of my favorite fic..though it was well written well executed (haha executed its a joke to go along with the story) and overall a good fic..
but you DO NOT ...mess with vinyl and tavis undieing love!