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Scootaloo is dead. Perhaps she died on her scooter, just as she would have wanted. Perhaps she died of an illness, or an accident, or murder. Who knows? Well, she's dead and buried, so let's focus on Applebloom. Falling into a depression because of Scootaloo's death, she keeps a diary. Within it, we can see her descent into a strange practice that is both familiar and alien. Is it truly evil to do this practice, or is it simply a tool for both the demons and saints among us, and among the ponies? We can only find out by reading this leatherbound book...

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

...This will not end well.

51409 Yay! I feel special. :moustache:

...wait...

Oh god I hope she looks like this :scootangel::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:

:rainbowderp: uhh... this is funky. ima give it some time before i rate it. see if it takes several turns for the worse/involves many amazing things happening. :derpytongue2: keep writing!:moustache:

The update will be on sunday. Start groaning with displeasure or going yay depending on your opinion!

I think this should be written in a story format and not a diary format.

While i do think its awesome an update is coming are way, dont be afraid to hold it longer for revisions and possibly adding more to the story.

I wont mind if the update takes longer thats for sure.

Cheers
~Iraqlobstah

Scootaloo is dead, so lets focus on Applebloom.

:/

Muahahah.:scootangel:

Now the question is, Pet Sematary "creepy undead THING" Consequences, or "Why does everypony look like they've seen a ghost, Applebloom? Why did Sweetie Belle faint when she saw me?" Consequences?:unsuresweetie::applecry:

You know, not having complete control over your undead minions tends to end pretty badly. They end up wandering everywhere and scaring ponies and making a mess out of things.
So, something the story isn't quite clear on; is Scoot alive again or is she a rotting, half-dead zombie?

Alive and well. The problem is the whole "Dead And Buried For The Best Part Of A Month" thing. Of course, there are even more problems afoot...

Not only does Applejack not understand the cutie mark, she hasn't brought up the large cut she SOMEHOW got that was big enough to fill a whole cup with blood.

WHO'S A SILLY PONY?! :ajsmug:

Dammit this chapter is short as hell.

Please make another update soon, these chapters are like bite sized chocolate, Short and sweet but there is more to be desired.

Either make em a few hundred words long with frequent updates or make them a couple thousand words long with longer updates.. Well that's not a demand more of a plead for sustenance.

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

Oh man, this won't end well! On a related note, IM PRESSING REFRESH BUT IT'S NOT UPDATING.

:pinkiecrazy: im greatly enjoying this. much more so than i thought i would at the start. keep it up!!

I wouldn't think her increased intellect would have a hard time devising an explanation for her cutie mark. She'd probably realize she had a talent for building and fixing things, and a scythe is a farm implement. It'd make sense for her to make up something about fixing farm equipment, and she could likely do it, too.

Need I say the scythe is BROKEN...... If it was repairing or building farm tools it would be a fixed scythe not a broken one.

Bit of a creative drought on Boundaries side, I am afraid. It'll have to go on hiatus. Do not worry, I will try my best to make it up with some short fics.

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