Applejack and Spike: Poker for two.

A friendly game of cards turns a long afternoon into a bit of fun for Applejack and Spike.

Author's note: Just a little something while I work on some longer projects, enjoy!

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Fanayvea

Fanayvea #1 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · 1 ·

pretty cool; for short attention spanners but still really really really dumb.

muter3456

muter3456 #2 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · ·

I liked it!

PhysicsInvers342

PhysicsInvers342 #3 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · ·

912091
I have to disagree with you. This is a rather well written story. It's not really supposed to have an extended storyline, seeing as the only tag on it is "Slice of Life". I found nothing objectionable about it except for "twilight" not getting capitalized. Two friends in a friendly game of weekly poker; What were you expecting to find? A confession of love?

PhysicsInvers342

PhysicsInvers342 #4 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · ·

Again, nice job on this one-shot. It's not often a one-shot like this can actually contain something worth reading, yet not have a disappointing ending. Well done.

YorkBrony

YorkBrony #5 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · ·

Very well written, almost like it was taken straight from an actual episode

appletini

appletini #6 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · ·

912091 I actually understand exactly what you mean. As stated it was written to be a short little 5 min read in between projects, since these shorts tend to get me going and provide ideas for the much longer pieces. It's not really intended to have any real story line, as PhysicsInvers kindly pointed out, just as most slice of life pieces don't really give much plot so to speak.

912481 Thanks for the kind words Yeah I wasn't so sure how the ending would go over so I'm glad to hear it played out nicely. Twilight is now capped too, thx for the catch.