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Twilight helps her friend perform a sonic boom. But when she does, it reminds the mare of someone gone from her life. In the end, Twilight is there to remind her she's not really gone.

This is my FIRST story, please feel free to put in any -constructive- criticism that you may have so I can become better! Thanks, and I hope you enjoy!

Also, BIG thanks to Starlitalpha for the massive help and support given! Without it I probably wouldn't have had the courage to post this :). Thanks again!

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Comments ( 40 )

Nice but how did Rainbow die? I have an idea :pinkiecrazy:

903383 Thanks for the read! Unfourtuantly I cant answer your question but perhaps i'll write a prequal if others really want to know :raritywink:

903399 She's a Pegasus? I thought she was an earth pony. I may be wrong :rainbowhuh:

When Fluttershy cries, we all die!:fluttercry:

Told you it would do well.:ajsmug:

903883 Thanks! And, oh my god, I totally forgot to mention how you helped me with this :facehoof: I'll put you in right now!

903440 This is true :fluttercry:

903399 You're right, you simply can't assume it's Dash. :rainbowderp: It could be Luna for all we know. :heart:

MAYBE it's talking about Fluttershy's mother being dead and the sonic shyboom would make her proud?

And a tear has been shed...which is frightning seeing as I've learned to quell emotions that well....course being a sociopathic serial killer helps...hahaha joking, dont call Celly :rainbowlaugh:

Great story though, definitely left froom for expansion!

909103 Thanks! I appreciate your feedback and i'm glad you enjoyed it (especially if it was good enough to make you cry)! I don't know if I will be writing a sequel right yet but I will be writing more stories so be sure to keep a look out if you enjoyed this one! :pinkiehappy:

HNNGGG's and D'aawww's aplenty. :rainbowkiss:

Nice job for your first story. About time too. :pinkiehappy:

And why is everypony assuming it's Dash? It could be Fluttershy's mother for all we know.

910854 You and For The Plot seem to have similar minds (you guys should share story ideas)! :twilightblush:

911179 Lol, I just read the comments. Sonic Shyboom... :rainbowlaugh:

912129 Yea, sounds silly doesn't it?

912880 Seems legit once you think about it. :trixieshiftright:

912129
somehow i prefer Flutterboom. :twilightsheepish:

913412 Sonic Rainboom. She used the first part of her name for it.

Sonic Flutterboom would fit that logic. :moustache:

:fluttercry: That was a beautiful story:fluttercry:

But now I have to know, who is it that died?

It's Not too Late...TO SLEEP LIKE A BABY, MATRESS WORLD! :rainbowlaugh: :facehoof:
Ok, ok, fine. I'll go now. JUST PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! :applecry:

A very sweet reminder of a lost friend. Sad, but a very enjoyable read. :fluttershysad:

920484 It's honestly one of those stories where the reader decides. However, if enough people want me to write a prequel (or sequel) that examines what's unsaid, I would love to try my hand at doing so. :)

926573 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

924054 I assume you read this story at a very late hour? :applejackconfused:

929686
How'd you guess? :pinkiehappy:
And on a sugar rush too, I may add.

929855 It's all so clear now :twilightsmile:

I'm impressed. This story's idea is original and adds something to the community.

You should tie up loose ends though.

933514 Thanks, i'm glad you like it! Besides being unsure about this mystery pony, are there any other loose ends that you feel need explaining (which would make the story better)?

935959 Not that I remember. The story is too short to have many loose ends.

938396 Ah, I see (and i'll be sure to count you as a vote for a prequel/sequel). I just wanted to make sure I wasn't missing something else.

I really like what you did with this story. You left it open for the reader to infer. I haven't seen many canon-changing fics that worked well, (flutterboom), but this one worked. Nice job. :twilightsmile:

980252 Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :pinkiehappy:

Just came across your story, and you Ma'am are terrible, making me cry!
Loved the story now going to see if you wrote a sequel/prequel

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2922088 Glad you liked the story! :3

Unfortunately (as you've probably seen) there is no sequel to it, as of right now. xD I just never got around to it and I guess I haven't had the motivation, in a long time, to write another story! >< One of these days I'll hopefully write again as I really do like how this one came out! :) Really glad that you liked this story though! :pinkiehappy:

Also, I'm actually a female (EDIT: Looks like that's been changed on your comment)! Guess you could call me... a rarity! :raritywink: Oh god... :facehoof:

For how short this story is, it left quite an impression in me.

You wrote it well! : )

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