a crack pairing for the ages, seeing as how they never spoke once in the show.

>>909177909177 Indeed. Picked the most absurd pairing for this one.

However, they might have spoken before, just not on show. We may never know.

>>909177909177>>909183909183

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>>909217909217 That pretty much sums it up.

This is HILARIOUS! Dramatic comedies are so funny.

>>909242909242 Thanks! Oh, you should just wait for the last chapter...

Nice going, Fluttershy.

Well, Fluttershy has interacted with Bon Bon before - specifically, she flipped a cart full of refuse onto her in "Putting Your Hoof Down". Truly this romance was meant to be!

I seriously burst out laughing when Rainbow Dash randomly kissed Fluttershy. Are they all in heat or something?

>>909255909255 Exactly. I'm glad you have caught on. What's more romantic then a dumpload of garbage?

>>909253909253 Oh Fluttershy. She be awkward/ruining lives.

>>909270909270 Could be. I actually should have mentioned that.

Well, no, actually. It's more "pent up romance." Rainbow Dash has been lusting after Fluttershy fro a LOOOOOOOONNNGGG time. Like, since fillies long time. Fluttershy's was more of a revenge shot thing.

>>909271909271 I can't wait for the last chapter then. But seriously, should I still be laughing at the story?

>>909281909281 First chaprter, sure! Second, I could see points where you would laugh. Laughing at the last chapter... I would question your sense of humor.

>>909290909290 When is the last one coming out?

>>909296909296 Soon. I'm working on like ten other stories, but I will probably get it up either tonight or tomorrow morning.

>>909248909248 Well then. Where is it???????

>>909305909305 K

>>909307909307 Um, not written yet? I was telling epicdonus to look forward to it being written.

>>909217909217 O U

Definitely waiting for the next chapter.

>>909396909396  

Glad you like it. I'll try and get the chapter up tonight. It could be later depending where you live, I'm in Hawaii.

>>909403909403 I'm up in Maine

>>909410909410 Ah. So you may have to read it tomorrow, unless you feel like staying up until 1 or 2 in the morning

>>909420909420 .....

yeaaaahhhhh, I did that last night.

I'll have to read it tomorrow

Surprisingly, there are a lot of Google results for "Flutterbon."

Which you probably already knew.

I for one am hoping its Rainbow Dash whos in Fluttershys house and that they become marefriends. As long as they are together, I don't mind how dark the story gets.

>Not having this listed as comedy also

Wow, things are really escalating quickly.

Nice quick-ship.

>>909712909712 Now really? huh. Couldn't find a good picture to use as the story image to save my life.

>>909934909934 Hmmm... perhaps.

>>909944909944 You think this should be listed as comedy? Really... Probably won't say that when the next chapter shows up.

! Finding beauty in negative spaces? You do know thats the title of a seether album right?

!!!!!WTF? Why did you kill Fluttershy?

Brilliant but demented. I'll just leave it at that.

Drugged-out ponies, it appears, are no more rational than drugged-out humans.

Then again, to be willing to kill over the exclusive possession of somepony's body - surely jealousy is a murderous toxin in its own right, even without pharmaceutical support.

I am, however, impressed that incident to execution took less than ninety days.  Among humans, you can barely get a court date to fight a speeding ticket in ninety days.

..........................................................

>>911005911005 If there was an award I'd give it to you. I eas actually doing a point give away on Deviantart to whoever noticed that first.

>>911191911191 Thank you! That's what I was aiming for. To make up for such a disturbing and unsettling ending, I'll write slip Flutterdash into the next story I"m writing, so be on the lookout for it.

>>911245911245 EEyup.

BTW, how do you get an image up?

>>912024912024 Normally, Bon-Bon and Lyra would not kill over a kiss. The pills did there work. Hopefully this tought you the danger of pills.

>>912026912026 I'll assume you are stunned in awe over the amazingness of the ending.

>Still not listed as comedy  

>>912236912236 I feel so stupid.

>>912249912249 Yes, the ending was quite funny, wasn't it.

>>912256912256 :D

>>912260912260 Well thanks anyway! From now on, I'll be sure to press all the buttons.

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>>912376912376 Lol that made my day.

>>911245911245

That made me laugh so hard.

So. So hard.

>>909312909312 I commented before that...

Oh. Well, the last chapter is out now.

I'm sorry but what the just happened?

>>913200913200 Did you read the whole thing?

wow....

>>913259913259

Yes, but it was too much for me to comprehend.

>>913260913260 I know right? I put in a nice little twist right there... But there is a reason for the dark tag

>>913266913266 Sorry for any trauma or nightmares caused by this. I really didn't think it was that bad... just very dark and sad.

I'm sorry! I know you said that you would question my sense off humor, but the third chapter was HILARIOUS! When Fluttershy said that she was down for a threesome, I laughed my HEAD OFF!!! When Lyra and BonBon were sentenced to death by hanging, I said in a British accent "Off to the GALLOWS!" It made the whole sadness, hilariousness! I love the comedic sense in all of the story! You are such an amazing writer, in which you know how to give the reader a good laugh. This has to be one of my most favorite short stories EVER!!! I know this is way to nice of a comment, but you deserved it. Thanks for the laugh.

>>914218914218 Thank you! I knew that many parts of this would make people laugh, and thanks for the kind praise! I'm glad I've been able to write something that made it into someone's favorite short stories ever! I'm currently working on a full comedy one, If Smosh Were Ponies, which should be up tomorrow, though you may have to watch me to get that notifacation. Your comment gives me hope of being a writer once I finish school. Thanks so much!

dufaq did i just read? good but weird.

>>916234916234 Why thank you! That's my specialty

Smooth one fluttershy, now rainbow dash will school you.

Who was that "friend" anyway? Why did you kill fluttershy?

>>937206937206 I'm not going to name any names, but it rhymes with "Rainbow Dash"

Uhhhh..........................

>>10023971002397 Best story ever? Yes.

>>10187611018761 Yea, sure...Let's go with that.

>>10187651018765 Somebody did a reading of this story.

>>10187751018775 That's cool man. I wish someone would read my stoires...

Step 1: Kill someone

Step 2: Eat them

Mission: Accomplished!

>>10194601019460 EEYUP!

I can't even imagine why anyone in their right mind would come up with such a sadistically horrible story, you don't even deserve any recognition for your atrocious 'story'.

You made me cry man, and it's hard to do that. Please remove yourself from this (already) hated world, don't bother knocking on the gates to Equestria.

/Edit; Didn't notice the dark tag. But maybe they should include a new tag, like Sadistically revolting. Perfect. The first two chapters had a good touch to the words however the third chapter didn't make any sense, and made me cringe and cry at the same time. You should focus on love stories, your good at them, just minus the overused graphical content. People can become attached to these ponies emotionally, if your going to write something like this in future, make sure to add the confession clearly in the description. Thanks!

>>15020111502011 WOAH

Well, I'm glad I'm able to evoke such emotion in people... yikes

If you want a nice love story I wrote, check out Where did you sleep liast night!

>>909248909248

PENIS

>>15845051584505 PAYNUS

I found myself laughing, I've never had such a twist happen in so few words. Holy shit, Brilliant on killing Fluttershy... The ending was not very pleasing to me... but I loved the story in general

>>15907111590711 Why thank you.

I am now sad beyond belief ........that being said, great story...still sad...will get over it

>>16794841679484 Thank you.

>>16884481688448

>>16884491688449

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>>16884621688462

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>>16884811688481

all those feels

>>16990541699054 I know.

I heard a bro read this on YouTube. I gotta say, during the first chapter, I was afraid this wasn't going to end in a horrible way, but I see I was wrong, and hilariously so.

Honestly, the one thing that gets me is the pills. I was expecting that Fluttershy or even Rainbow Dash had sent them to Bon-Bon, and that she and Lyra would both die when they took them. So the question of where they came from remains unfulfilled at the end. It's slightly terrifying!

>>17752611775261 Hey, I'll do that to ya.

Such a dashing success.

>>911005911005

fuck. I thought I was going to be the first one to post about that. and I was all excited for it and everything...

>>18037991803799 Seether is best hard rock band.

Seether reference in third chapter? LET'S DO IT!

>>19902121990212 Seether and fall Out Boy were my two first rock bands.

>>19906851990685

I haven't really gotten into Fallout Boy yet. I've been listening to the OST of the game Max Anarchy (Anarchy Reigns in the USA).

>>19907031990703 Fall Out Boy is SO good. When you've got time, give a listen to Folie á Deux.

>>19907291990729

What am I waiting for? I can do that now!

>>19907681990768 Here you are:

*reads third chapter*

..... What?

>>19917261991726 Yup.

Well....that was sh*t

>>21788072178807 Yes, yes it was. A lot of my earlier stuff is.

>>21788982178898

How?........

>>21820562182056 Well, I wasn't very good at writing.

I got better.

>>21831992183199

Brilliant choice in video