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kits


All my things are horse things!

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My Collection of 30 minute speedfics. Yes, I was late to this game.

Prompt 40: Magic has disappeared from Equestria.
Twilight Sparkle deals with a world empty of Magic
[Dark, Slice of Life]
[Twilight, Applejack]

Prompt 41: Celestia remembers.
A bad dream brings Celestia's feeling into the open
[Slice of Life]
[Celestia, Luna]

Prompt 43: I Think We're Alone Now
Dash and Fluttershy have a secret game they play together
[Slice of Life, Comedy]

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

903070
Really... I thought you'd be better than that... Turn in your Brony certification...

903173
Please... don't though... I mean... trolling only causes people to rage... go... do this on youtube then... but leave the peaceful world of Equestria out of this matter?

903223
It's fine. I just deleted it.

Ooh, i get it!
When magic left the "magic of friendship" literally left too!

I liked that. Very much so.

Full Disclosure was really nice and symmetric and, well, elegant, but Two Fillies' Secrets is really what gets my heart hammerin' here. Loved it.

903223
Now I want to know what happened here; the comments are deleted.

you should totally take away the "(difficulty: no romance)" part just to mislead the readers. Loved this short story!

906550
I should do it as non-romantic clop. "Oh, he's leading up to something else- what?!"

904793
Yeah... unfortunately, Kits is right... we have a "first-er" in our midst... :ajbemused:

There was one sentence that I could not understand near the beginning:
Her pleas did not to slow the vision....but it really doesn't matter...

So, depressing, heartwarming, and adorable. I'm glad I got here early. I don't know if I could take further emotional whiplash.

910546
That's supposed to mean she tried to STOP having the dream, but, in the manner of nightmares, was unable to halt it.

918201
Yeah. They're gonna be random like that. I'll try to label them all.

I love this one,
it has a very "end of 1984" vibe to it, but without a need for a big brother figure
"If you want a picture of the future without the magic of friendship, imagine a horseshoe stamping on a pony face — forever."
:pinkiesad2:

would be great as a long story, could go dark with this as an ending or happy with this as a beginning. I imagine this as Twi's last attempt before it all just gets to much to live with anymore.
I imagine Celestia is having an even worse time than the Mane 6 is this reality... wasted on Victory Gin and supported by Luna working the streets down by the airship docks.

It's not easy being this positive, Even smiling makes my face ache!:pinkiesad2:

Y'know, I could see Twilight actually being a bit offended by this, and the whole cardboard horn thing. She takes Celestia pretty seriously, after all. (Celestia, herself, would probably be delighted. :trollestia: )

Ch -1: Hmm. Not bad but technically assumes that "Magic is Friendship" rather than "Friendship is Magic".

Ch-2: Ahh the best most embarrassing games you can only play with your closes friends. You could do a bit of a crossover with CC with this and have them randomly encounter "Shadeflower" and "Wild Apple" in the woods. For great justice... and epic lulz.

1104757
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but if you assume that Friendship is a literal Magical force (much like "light" is EM radiation) it makes more sens. I guess?

What is CC? I don't recognize it. :twilightblush:

1105088

Couch Crusader. Via Equestria, Rarity and AJ had a similar thing going in their childhoods.

I like how it leads up as if they're doing something really wrong, then it turns out they're just playing 'Princess' and don't want anyone to know. I LOVE IT!

And you get 5/5 Pinkie Happies for Da'ww.
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

910546

She was pleading with the vision, you know, the dream, to stop. She was begging for the nightmare not to happen. Got it now? :pinkiehappy:

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