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The dragons living on the other side of the world believe that Celestia's power is too great, and they deserve that power more than she does. she has no authority over the dragons land, and yet she controls the glowing sun that keep them warm during the short days, leaving them to shiver in the cold, unforgiving nights. Their plan is to kill her, and receive the warm rays of the sun for eternity.Can the mane six protect the ponies of Equestria, along with their princess?
Chapter 1: The girls are invited to the Castle in Canterlot for a get together with others from around Equestria. no one knows why, but that doesn't stop Pinkie from having a party.
Chapter 2: Twilight grows ever curious about what happened to the Princess, so she peeks into her dreams to discover what truly happened between her, Luna and the dragons.
Chapter 3: When the princess wakes, Twilight goes to her side to discuss what they plan to do next.
Chapter 4: The mane six discuss their fears about this brewing war, and some make a stand early on that they will have nothing to do with it.
Chapter 5: The princess requests for the mane six to head to Zebra territory to try and gather support, but first they go to Zecura, hoping she will do the same.
Chapter 6: Rainbow Dash rushes toward Canterlot to deliver a letter to Celestia. However she comes across a couple of dragons and tries to take them on all by herself. (Yay! First fight scene!)
(This is a story i've been thinking about for a while, before season 2 arrived, and i've finally gotten around to writing it down. i hope the ideas i share are interesting and create an interesting story... Hope you enjoy.)
EXTENDED WARNING (Just to be more detailed) This story contains mild violence, including fighting, blood, and implied death. Also, if you dont like original characters, there are some in this story. they are not the main focus and so far are only in for brief amounts of time. the story focuses on the mane six and how they interact with each other in this situation, not about my OC that i just HAD to share with you... just making sure you all know that cause i know how some people freak out about OC's...
This seems well written.... even though I'm not thrilled with the underlying premise. I always assumed that Luna and Celestia control the moon and sun of Equestria, not for the whole world. I'll be following anyhow -- curious to see where it goes.
50770 I can understand it's not a premise that would fit with everyone... but i figured she controls an entity that has an effect on the entire planet, but she only rules over Equestria; the land of ponies. So what happens when the other creatures notice this and say 'Enough'. I got a few plans for twists, and i hope they're interesting ones...
Nice story so far, though there are some capitalization issues to address.
Off the top of my head words with issues are: Pinkie in chapter one and in chapter four there is Ponyville, Bloom (for Apple Bloom), Fluttershy, and Dash (in Rainbow Dash).
Looking forward to more, particularly what the plans for Twilight are.
86812 Yeah, i might've missed a few things like that... i'll go back later and tinker with things like...
As for Twilight... I'm still not not certain of what i will have planned... i have a few benchmark events, but i'm not entirely certain what will be between them... i want something pretty big to happen to everyone, but so far i'm not certain...