not bad keep it up

Nice start, I wonder what this mysterious history is all about and how (if) humans tie into all of this.

i had just recently gotten the idea to do an origins story and it was going to be the end of flutter valley.

seriously, what are the chances. my soul has nearly been crushed. but not just yet.

let me tell you, you cant get rid of me so easily. prepare yourself for competition. THIS MEANS WAR!

smile smile smile

>>825556825556 I've been planning this story as an animated series since July 2011. It was only recently that I decided a prose adaptation would be easier to produce and would allow me to get my story out there faster.

>>826299826299 yeah, i was just being dramatic. i read it and its completely different from what i had in mind. ill love reading more when it comes out, good job

>>827752827752 I was wondering about that. I hoped you might be joking, but one never knows...there are plenty of crazies out there...

I see that this is a G1 as G4's past story, as well as a HiE story. Going into this cold, my lone thought is "Please be Megan, please be Megan, please be Megan..."

Mind you, I'm not reading this right now, as I am an hour and a half late for bed, and I have work in the morning.

"Please, dear Faust, let this not be some stupid OC Human..."

>>21758622175862 Oh it's Megan all right. Also, thank you for reminding me to finish this story. I had it all mapped out at one point but stuff happened and... well, yeah.

This actually looks quite interesting... As does most of your work, but your views on Celestia's past seem interesting... Especially if it involves humans...