• Member Since 22nd Jun, 2012
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Licorice Twist


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Shit. I started reading the description and... Apple Bloom has been dating Strike . At first I thought it was Spike... :pinkiecrazy:
But for me it's a nice story. Keep writing :)

900260 Much as I like the pairing you referenced, the punchline very likely wouldn't have worked that way. :rainbowlaugh:

That was actually a rather sad ending, if a bit silly.

900260
And I like Bloom/Spike shipping too :/

Man, I just keep thinking about how that poor colt must be feeling right now...

D: Well, that's it for Applebloom and Strike. Poor kids...
Great story, though!

Thanks, everypony! :heart:

Her-hahn-ha-ha-ha-HAAA! :rainbowlaugh: "Dat slaps me on da knee!"

Wow, this was actually much better than I expected. Well done, good sir, well done!
Not really in to F/F, but for what it's worth, it made for good plot device, no pun intended.

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Thank you so much! Glad I did it justice! :pinkiehappy::yay:

Didn't read it yet but I'm already laughing.
:rainbowlaugh:

Interesting but random at the same time. :derpyderp2:

Poor Applebloom. :applecry:
Funny story, though.

:rainbowlaugh:

Absolutely loved it. Great tie-in, too.
This is soooo getting Favorited. I haven't laughed that much in days!

That was hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

Someone's sleeping on the couch for the rest of their life :pinkiecrazy:

Oh God.

That is amazing.

Not complain, but Strike is a girl. Eyelashes tells everything.
http://kepgep.hu/2012/07/13/main/eyelashes.png

I remember reading the origonal and thinking about a sequal like this... It did not dissapoint! :pinkiehappy:

Now all we need is someone to write a prequal with Rainbow dash and the actualy happening! =D

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Strike is actually listed as a Colt.

903710

Uhm...click the link in the description... o_O

I kept reading it as Spike. That ending made me lol.

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Yeah, I almost kept typing Spike as well, I had to go back multiple times. I probably should have picked a different colt due to the name, but eh. Going through the list on the MLP Wiki, there really aren't too many colts shown o_O

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At first I was like :rainbowderp:
And then I was like :twilightoops:
But then I felt like :pinkiesick:
And then I was all :rainbowlaugh:
Cool story bro!

Pretty good. It went into detail and dats always how clops are supposed to be. For your hard work take a mustache:moustache:.
Keep writin' and readin':eeyup:

Not bad at all. I enjoyed the funny dialogue and you didn't skimp on the details, which I appreciated.
I'll give it a like, a tip of my hat, and a good day to you, sir/madam. :pinkiesmile:

amazing job
two thu...oh wait...ponys dont have....ummm....hoofs up?

903858 O_O there is a description! This is the greatest thing ever!

900363 Words cannot describe the story?

905701

Enjoy the story that inspired this one :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks ponies! :twilightsheepish:

906043

I was curious about that myself! :pinkiegasp::derpytongue2:













....................what the fuck

Moral of the story is that Applebloom licked a dudes asshole and bit his dick.

why the hell is this rated comedy and not sad ?! v.v i feel bad now ! :facehoof:

906484

Glad you liked it :D :D :D

I have so many protips for everyone in a work of fiction it isn't even funny. Here are a few.
To AB's parents:
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!"
-Dumbledore, My Immortal.

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Muzzle tells differently. Sharp edges = colt rounded edges = filly.

I have big eyelashes, and I'm a guy. What do eyelashes have to do with gender?

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Snip and Snails have rounded muzzle. Where your god now?

936820 Well they are gay, so your argument is invalid.:derpytongue2:

Apple Bloom buried her face back into her hooves and cried. Dammit. Sex was ruined!

dash.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/134393861704.jpg

Genius stuff!

1071084

My god, I love that pic! Rofl. :pinkiecrazy:

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