>>15290541529054 duely noted, Ill change it up in the next few chapters and edit later.

I, uh, how do I put this... You might want to put a mature tag on this. Protect the innocent, dude.

In addition to that, I do agree with a lot of the others that you're going way too fast, and on top of that, I'm pretty damn sure it's not normal for someone to get some booty that quickly after meeting someone. Of course, I could be wrong but he's also been thrown into a completely new world, so I would imagine that there would at least be a few important issues. Just remember this quote and find a way to apply it, and you should be fine storywise: "Even the best laid plans of mice and men often go awry."

>>15313011531301 agreed, but pls note, wrote that all in one night, that one, after a long day. I was half asleep when I wrote it. I do plan on changing it but, not taking it out. And yeah, it is still to fast, but I think i managed to slow it down more than the original version. I'm going to go edit chapter 4 a bit, should have it  fperfect in like two weeks, aslo, thx, I actuely forgot to put this as mature.

i like the new version better