O.O

I approve of this.

Again, awesome. I was expecting it to be Pinkie trolling Rainbow for the cupcake prank, intentionally not answering to wind her up, but this is so much better. Because what other way could we know why she wasn't talking.

Abrupt end? what.

...I...was expecting something to indicate that Applejack had a crush on Twilight. But the white and purple cupcakes would hint at, if they were supposed to hint at anything, an interest in Rarity...or a dislike of Rarity(AJ: Haha, look Twi, Ilm eatin Rarity -omnomnomnom-). Anyway, my point is I do not see what you were trying to do there.

Ha. Very cute.

I wouldn't say this fit the prompt though...

Ahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahah! YES! I love it!

...there is a distinct and troubling lack of Luna smilies...

Anyway. This was awesome. Ten thousand points and a moon for you.

...eyyup. Considering it's Fluttershy that does come across as a big fight.

I was really curious as to what you were going to have them fighting over, and this is probably the only sort of thing that would do it.

Well, hey, Maybe Rarity can make a move on him now. ooh, oo! Maybe he'll make a move on HER! This demands a sequel! (And the Luna Pinkie chapter demands an entire story(can't believe I forgot to mention that.))

For a second there I was expecting there to be a twist about some other Twilight...but I see that the prompt included hr full name. Perhaps to avoid such an easy out in the first place.

But I liked thiis. It was a very Twilight thing to do.

Oh poor Flutershy.

But Whoo! Fluttershy won!

Very interesting take on the prompt.

For the record, I love irony. And the idea that Dash is within a razors edge of bombing her hopes of getting on good terms with Spitfire over an attempt to impress her with her (non-)ability to drink when she doesn't usually drink any more than Dash normally does, which ironicaly probably would have impressed her more.

I wish there was more of this, because I'd love to know if they could salvage this.

...me thinks they all still a weeeeeeee bit drunk.

The first thing that came to mind, unfortunately, was that she was having an afair with her brother, as it struck me as the only thing that could be that horrible. Of course the next thing that came to mind was that she was probably blowing this completely out of proportion. Then it occured to me that this was probabl food related, which immedietly lead me to believe this had to do with her enjoying a fruit that wasn't an apple. And as soon as you mentioned "skin", for some reason, I was sure I was right.

Was not expecting an orange though, which is odd as that would be the obvious choice, what with the whole "apples and oranges" thing.

Ha. I like this one for one of the same reasons I likd the Luna/Pinkie one. I've never seen something like it before. Specifically, a story in which one of the mane six, and had previously dated another of the mane six.

Funny you brought up the Element of Loyalty there at the end though, as you'd think the Element of Honesty wouldn't be making up excuses and hiding things like that.

Huh. Interesting. I deffinietly like the acceptance of her talent as, well, being something she's just good at. It's an original(to me at least) take on the whole cutie mark concept.

That was awesome.

Horrible fanfiction withing great fanfiction. I did find the parenthetical comments interesting. Rainbow Dash might have something there if she could tell a better story.

It's funny how the obvious can be so obvious but still be beyond your grasp. As soon as Snips took the costume I knew it was not going to go well. I just couldn't figure out how. Then, as soon as he said, "It is I, the Mysterious Mare-do-well!" I went, "oh crap" and then Applebloom went ahead and said exactly what was hovering just out of my reach until the previous line.

So. Much. Awesome!

That really was awesome. Pinkie should win a moon for pulling that off. So many things could have gone wrong with that set-up, but she managed it flawlessly.

(Okay, seriously, what's with the lack of comments on this story?)

Anyway...nice fake out. It wwas timed very nicely, and blended in quite well.

Maybe someday AJ, maybe someday.

"-Time Limit-"

...that's new. I never really gave any thought to how tough these would be to complete in a half hour. Guess the clock beat you this time.

But this a fun little tale. The thing I liked the most was that I didn't realise this was from the pets perspective, so of course that was a fun surprise. I think Angel's ...thing with Tank didn't come off as well as it could have though, since this didn't really give you the opportunity to build that up. It was still cute to have him hug Tank when he finally found him though.

As soon as I hard that name I was wondering if this child had something to do with Twilight or Applejack. Not surprised it turned out to be both. I was also not surprised that it came from their first date. Though, I was expecting it to be more the bottle that got them drunk enough to hook up.

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GENIOUS!!!

I just saw this episode for the first time today so, yeah, great timing huh? But truely, this is awesome. It's perfect.

Haha. Did not see that joke coming

I like the idea od Fluttershy being the first mate. It provides a nice subject dissonence. And is also the only pony Pinkie could drag along on this. Rainbow would have gone along with it, but not without getting some questions answered first, thereby ruining the joke.

Kinda short, no? The name that is. Sonya Apple, maybe?

So, Rarity and Applejack again, huh? That truely is an odd couple if there ever was one. Can't imagine it really working, honestly.

Still fun to read though. Possibly because of how easily they' but heads. But I gotta admit I'm impressed with Rarity comming up with that name so quickly.

Wow.

Nice attempt on Twilight. Not sure how she didn't expect, what I'm guessing could only have been, "eat" to not sound dirty in that context though.

Funny thing, I totally called it being Fluttershy. Why? Because Derpy is the only one who'd think she was a better flier than her.

What is up with that anyway? Flutters flew down Dash in S2Ep2... or maybe that was just the exception to the rule...yeah probably...

...I really wanna read some Derpy Dash now....

That was...

Meh.

I did very like the ending though.

But ...but...maybe the date won't go well! Don't give up hope! She can't help it that she's so sexy all the girls want her!

Wow.

I...

How did Rainbow even get her Chroma Splash sketch anyway?

That was good. Obvious, but good. It was very in character for Twilight to be so neurotic about it. Nice to see she loved Fluttershy more than Celestia.

Ah yes. It's been a few chapters since there was a good prompt that gave you some real room to be creative. This was deffinietly my favorite chapter in awhile. I think it worked very well, and...well, aside from the 4th wall breaking, it felt like it could have been played perfectly straight.

Oh, and thanks for that site. I'd been trying to remember what that place was called.

Oh. My GOD.

Rarity's a red head isn't she!

Oh that's just so perfect.

Poor rarity though.

Aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww yyyeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!

I was dissapointed that you were going such an expected route, but then! Then! The end! AWESOME!

Yes. I love the chapters where you do things like this.

Once again, I'm loving these dark twists.

Shame I haven't seen this episode yet.

...wow.

Meta humor at it's finest.

...but if Pinkie is writing these... that xplains a lot actually.

...I think you left off the second half of the prompt.

The "You said you'd be there for me" was in there, but that, "and it's because of me"

Was...implied, with her running back for the gifts and camera, at best. It kinda feels like the actual end of the fic got left off actually...

As soon as you made the cut I knew whre you going with this. Shame Twilight didn't walk in them in mid-fight. But...yeah. this was a surprise within a surprise, within a surprise.

That was...cute. Unfortunately the prompt itself had no interest for me as it wants you to do things with established characters that I've never heard of... -shrug-

Hahahahaha. Oh how I love nuerotic Twilight.

Still, it's a funny thing if you think about it. Seems like the sort of things most unicorns would know about. Or at least a super-ultra-studious unicorn like her.

....-snickersnort-

That is awesome. So..oh. when did the sisterhoove social start then? The last thousand years? And so, I guess Luna and Celestia participated in the most recent one? If Applejack saw it that is, I guess that'd make the most sense... this would be fun to elaborate on, but...eh. fun story.

The meaning of life is to experience it, so they're all right...to great or lesser degrees, or more they are all right collectively.

(How much of the prompt was you, btw? Was it really a three part prompt?)

Aaaaaaaaaaaand DONE!

Read and reviewed every chapter!

Might have been done quicker if I'd been able to read all this on an actual computer, but it was still fun!

I/ kinda tired though. I've read longer things but this just kinda burned me out.

This was a really impressive work though. I'm impressed that you were able to do this(everyday?) for over a month. And each one in a half hour or less? Amazing.

...yeah, I'm kinda burned out now. Thanks for writting though I enjoyed all your stories.

>>906356906356

The prompt was just the first two parts. I chose the question myself.

And thank you for all your comments! They're greatly appreciated :D

>>Makokam

The line "Rarity liked to watch her calories anyway" indicates she made the cupcakes for herself and Rarity. :)

Curses and now we want to know how things will go and we may never know.  NOOOOOOO! lol

Oh god DAMNIT! Now I have to catch up again!

-alerts so this doesn't happen again-

Anyway, this was an interesting use of the prompt. I figured they were tied together pretty much from the start, but for some reason I had a hell of a tim trying to figure out how. I guess I forgot to think in terms of front and rear legs.

Scootaloo might want to go out and check her flank first though. She seems to have a talent for animal impressions.

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Believe it or not while I was waiting for this chapter to load(reading on my phone), I went and made myself a smoothie. How serendipitous.

Anyway...Rarity, you just don't have the complexion for that shade of blond, I don't know what you were thinking.

And a four-leaf-clover smoothie...I wonder if that would work, I could use the luck...

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I don't think the spell works like that.

I mean, if Twilight knew she was under a spell, wouldn't she want to break it? And wouldn't she do her best to break it just because AJ asked her to?

Well, at least they're not treating her like they did that doll. That could have gotten ugly...

I can count the number of times I've seen this show on one hand and that was exactly how I remember it. The use of Rarity and Rainbow Dash as AJ's parents doesn't make any sense from a logical point of view...or maybe it does, because... whatever. They were all perfectly cast. 20x better than the other one you did for this prompt.

Wow. You really don't know anything about Dr. Who?.

That was still funny though. I honestly have no idea where those lyrics came from though. Was that supposed to be a parody?

But wow. Yeah. That was something else.

Ha! The end bit was great. "I'd never drink a mare-tini!" Nice twist on the matter but hey, at least she's a happy(and productive) drunk.

>>956054956054

Yep, I'm one of the three or so people who doesn't watch it, it seems

And the lyrics are a parody of "Freeze Ray" from Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW-YYYEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!

Crackle truely is best dragon!

Oh...oh my god...

This is, I think, the best thing you've written. Here at least. I don't know what else you've wirtten(maybe I should). This demands expansion. Because this was just...wow. yeah. And you wrote this in thirty minutes? Damn.

Please expand on this?

>>956140956140

I don't watch it either, but I've seen it, and even if I hadn't I've heard enough about it...and that's not counting the old episodes before the revival.

So...-shrug- bad prompt, I guess for making it dependent on another fandom.

to pinkie she just saved twilights life

>>900860900860 yesssss the luna pinkie!!!

>>903277903277 These are so dificult i tried one once myself it was a special 50 min. one and i still went over. It wasnt even close to this par (never got to submit it the box was closed when i got there.)

I thought I alerted this...

Anyway...I was expecting something like this. It had all the ear-marks of a "not what it looks like" story, but o course there was the make out session beforehand, an the prompt was about shipping. All of them. Together. As a unit. So I knew there had to be another drop coming. I just wasn't expecting it to drop like that. Post game orgy indeed.

And of course Twilight would schedule out sexy fun time.

O.o

That was...creative.

I liked your work around for the "Pinkie's Four Best Friends" thing, which was obviously intending to have one of the main six left out, but now I'm picturing some sort of catdog pony....or maybe they're just litterally stuck together. Brings new meaning to the term TwiPie

Hmm...not bad. Not bad.

Though, you kinda danced on the edge of the special rule...but I think you passed.

Ha!

I see it too AJ, I see it too...

Wow...I don't even..I mean...well wow...but how did Rarity invite him, if she had to take a second to recognize him? He's rather distinct, don't you think?

That certainly was a creative take on the prompt.

But that's why I like reading your stories.

Oh surely Dash isn't ashamed...

Still, I think it was pretty obvious that he wasn't a pegasus as soon as Dash said he'd moved away really early. I don't think Dash would be so dense as to say that...well...I suppose she said that's what a psychology book would say...but really, that's what anypony would say. That or "He couldn't walk on clouds."

Maybe she was just embarressed by Pinkie, like how Blitz was standing there going, "-awkward...-"

...make everypony happy, feed off said happiness. Sounds legit. Shame she went and snapped his neck. That could have changed the future of Questria and all changelings everywhere.

Wow. No wonder they're criminals. There's no way those three can function in normal society...kinda weird that they could go that long without getting their cutie marks though...especiall brick breaker, since he was in prison for wrecking buildings.

Well, well awesome story *laughs insanely*

...wow. that is so...er...

I can totally see Rarirty doing that. She'll probably spend so much time creating her alter-ego that she'll forget about actually being a hero though. Even if it is just a hero a fashion.

I gotta admit, I don't get this. I even read it to a friend to see if he got it, but he can't remember what it's a paradoy of, only that he "liked the Family Guy parody better."

Soooo.....

Yeah.

Wow.

I just love your twists.

So much.

...why hasn't Big Mac given Apple Bloom that speech?

Still, very nice.

>>956054956054 Can't tell if serious... Haven't you seen Dr Horrible's Sing-Along Blog?

It breaks the heart.

Where are these prompts coming from?

DAUGHTER?!

>>10156171015617

Nope

>>10268761026876

That would be Thirty Minute Ponies . They post a prompt every day.

What followed the --TIME LIMIT-- made this-

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20% COOLER!!!  And some D'awww for good measure.

How are these mares having kids?!

So how does this work?  Is there a father or would magic be involved?

I'm so confused...

First, I thought it was

Then it could have been

But it really was

Oh you tease!

At least it wasn't a freaky moon that crashes into the world in three days time.

>>904419904419

Need I type more?

>>904772904772

It's probably green.  Remember her reaction in Trixie's episode?

So few words, so much heartbreak...

I'm the first?  MUAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Anyways, alternate futures and how they start interests me greatly.

And this is why I disliked Invasion of the Body Snatchers.  But to be honest, I think the collective would permanently shut down if it accepted Pinkie Pie.

strikes again!  Only to be struck out...

42.

What?

I think "Bifrost Blitz" would be a better name.  Because Norse Names are teh Bomb!

>>10146751014675

It was a Twilight Zone episode about a bank clerk (male) only wanted to read.  But his work, his eyes (needed glasses to see), his wife and the universe in general wouldn't let him.  One day, he goes into the bank's vault, when it suddenly closes.  And as the door locks, evey nuke in the world goes boom.  He is the only surviver on the planet, then he realizes something.  He can read withiout anyone saying otherwise.  Not his wife, not starvation, and especially not radiation.  So as he starts reading, he has to do... something, when suddenly, he trips.  His glasses break as they hit the ground.  And what he says was more or less like what was written in this chapter.

Actually, Twilight Sparkle would be a better victim for this.  Twilight, books, Stephenie May- I'm done.

In this world flowers and candy can be the same thing   =)

What a nice lampshade you have there.

Anway, "why" is a great answer. Also, I liked "Elusive", honestly, the only one who really needed a name change...well, that and Pinkie.

Awww. How cute.

And a very good thing too. I hope Lyra is in the season 3 premiere or I'm going to end up thinking she's still in that cave.

I love stories about Scootaloo's homelife(or lack thereof) and this is the most interesting take on the subject I've yet read.

Haha. Applebloom is going to be the big sister. I love it.

I also liked the, "o btw Scootaloo was adopted" moment.