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Corejo 65729

Joined January 2012
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    Corejo's Stories (6)

    • Reading Rainbow
      When Twilight is admitted to the Ponyville hospital, Rainbow Dash is there for her.

      7,358 words · 29,529 views · 2,398 likes · 37 dislikes
    • Sprinkles
      Twilight and Pinkie Pie bake cupcakes.
      3,073 words · 1,192 views · 130 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Transcendence
      Scootaloo learns the wonders of flight.
      40,552 words · 7,393 views · 478 likes · 17 dislikes
    • Working as Intended
      Twilight casts a spell that doesn't turn out as planned.
      4,943 words · 2,320 views · 176 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Lyra vs. Goldfish
      1,818 words · 1,261 views · 91 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Darkness Beckons
      7,618 words · 406 views · 25 likes · 3 dislikes
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    Pressed by the looming shadow of academic tardiness after her internment at the hospital, Twilight again attempts the use of the Split-Sight spell to catch up on her studies.  But when a strange side effect alters more than just her vision, she finds that things might not go quite as she had planned.

    [Independent sequel to Reading Rainbow.  Cover Art by: Conicer]

    First Published
    11th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Aug 2012

    Comments ( 71 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This picture gives me flashbacks to The Spiderses :twilightoops:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So I was all ready to sit down, ignore all distractions, and get to work on my own story that needs to be done in a couple days, when: Oh look!  A notification--wonder what it--  ...damn it.  Another twenty minutes of free writing time GONE.  Lost in hilarity and enjoyment!  I hope you're happy with yourself.  Creating funny and creative tales like you do.

    *applauds*  Heh, this was very funny and very enjoyable.  I'll be watching for whenever chapter 2 comes out.  Good luck and keep up the excellent work, mate.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    "Twilight Samsa awoke to discover that she had been transformed into a cockroach."

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>889743

    Not a cockroach, no.  But you do get a cookie for knowing your literature.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowkiss:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    *sigh* Here we go again!

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    An interesting beginning thus far. I'll be keeping tabs on you. I offer a like, but I'll save my fav for later.

    -Tricondon

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Nice start, tracked.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>891523

    Ok, I need... I need you to work out an icon situation with Glassed, 'cause I..I, uh, just spent far too long being very, very confused.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>891589

    Na, I prefer messing with your mind. More fun that way.

    -Glassed

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>891597

    YOU'RE THE DEVIL! :applecry:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>891610

    Psh, hardly. That guy works under me.

    -Glassedon

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>889572 OH GOD

    THEY'RE BACK

    THE SPIDERSES

    Th-th spidersess....

    oh god... oh god...

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Clone entered the new story universe with much glee. He was always excited to start looking in on a new universe starting to unfold. He called out for his favorite character.

    "Oh Twilight?" Twilight?"

    "Down here!" Clone looked down to see a cricket.

    "What?" Clone asked.

    "I'm a Twilight Crickle."

    "What?"

    "Yeah bad joke."

    "What?"

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wow, I felt suspense as she tried the spells.

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Spidersesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>891622

    You, I, uh.

    Uh.

    There is.. and then...WAIT.

    I got this.

    FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuu

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>889743 I think he was supposed to be a dung beetle, actually.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>889743 I recognize that from Spore.

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmm someone been reading Kafka.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Sweet Celestia does that spell sounds freaky.

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>889572 Oh The Spiderses. Good times, good times:moustache:

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #26 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>892130

    >>892140

    Was there a reason for derailing my story's comment thread?

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>892144

    I lack any semblance of maturity.

    Either that, or I just like trolling people.

    -Tricondon

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    The Flieses?

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    twilight hasn't learned shit!:twilightangry2:....and we love her for that:twilightblush::twilightoops:

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    On my read-later list JUST FOR THAT PIC. :pinkiehappy:

    And >>892190 All of my LOLs.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    That picture proves that you can't just put Twilight hair and eyes on ANYTHING and make it hot....

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Spiderses.

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>892144

    It was absolutely necessary.

    On topic: Dash stuck in the cabinet is still my favourite gag

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This reminds me of 'honey, I shrunk the kids' but with an added species swap twist. Me likey

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh shi... That image...

    That is one sexay fly.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Did she accidentally read, and thus cast, two spells at once? Or did that just kinda happen, due to screwing with a spell beyond its intent? Or maybe I should take the title of the story literally and assume Twilight didn't realize the spell was supposed to work that way if you double it.

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Is twilight a cricket now because if so then crickets are supposed to be lucky so maybe spike will want to keep her as a pet... also now that i think about it fluttershy will probably be the only pony capable of communicating with her at this moment.

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>892140 I JUST SPENT THE LAST THIRTY MINUTES OF MY LIFE SAYING "You mad? He mad." at the screen, caught in the hypnotic cuteness of Scootaloo and AB!

    ....Why would you do that to me? :pinkiesad2:

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>899236

    Because the hypnotic cuteness of Scootaloo and Applebloom demanded I share it with the world.

    -Tricondon

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>899519 It was awful! :raritycry:

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>889572

    I'm just hoping the opening lines to Chapter Two are the words "Everything was bigger, and eight."

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>905147

    The opening lines of chapter two will be much better than that, I assure you.  Much, much better.

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>905163

    "Everything was bigger, and nine."

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Dum Dum DUUUUUUUUM

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This was great. I can't wait to see how the others react to Twilight :rainbowlaugh:

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 44w, 7h ago · · ·
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    For One so smart she done something dumb

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>895407

    The title was actually taken from a little real life story a while back, if you'd like to hear it.

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>940137

    Sure, now you've got me curious.

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Psst, yo Kafk... er, Corejo. Your review is done. Nice work on this mate.

    #52 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    As long as Rarity dosen't try to squish her... :twilightoops:

    #53 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    And so it continues...

    Speaking of stories continuing... Transcendence? :pinkiehappy:

    If, um, that's alright with you, of course... :fluttershyouch:

    #54 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Scootaloo's plan would have worked if Sweetie Belle didn't have such a weak grip.

    #55 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    MORE ROCKETS!

    Scootaloo shall earn her astronaut cutie mark yet!

    hmmm, wonder if Flylight Sparkle

    can still use magic in that form

    #56 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Where is big spider red Mac?

    #57 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1020694 Sweetie Belle does have a weak grip...

    #58 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Considering the shape of the insect in the Cover image, Twilight got turned into a wasp.

    #59 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    "This reminds me of th' time you tried to drill a hole through yer head! Remember THAT?!"

    "That would have worked if you hadn't stopped me!"

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Moar would be nice.

    Also ohgodwhy.

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Love Twilight singing the Alphabet song to remember where the letters are. Mainly because I do it too and now I don't feel quite as silly. I mean, a Purple Pony, a Princesses' Priveleged Private Protege does it! How can Pastel Ponies be Considered Childish?

    #62 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I enjoyed reading about Twilight's failed spells more then I thought I would, hopefully you get around to an ending in the future.

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 15w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee compound eyes.

    You know who else had compound eyes? Hitler Insects.

    #64 · Chapter 2 · 9w, 2d ago · · ·
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    wow good story  :twilightsmile:

    i wait for more :raritywink:

    #65 · Chapter 2 · 5w, 5h ago · · ·
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    >>1092790 oh celestia that avatar...:pinkiesick:

    #66 · Chapter 2 · 5w, 5h ago · · ·
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    #67 · Chapter 2 · 5w, 5h ago · · ·
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    >>2427159 do you like pokemon?

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 5w, 5h ago · · ·
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    #69 · Chapter 2 · 5w, 4h ago · · ·
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    #70 · Chapter 2 · 6d, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>2427298 I like ze Pokemonz!

    #71 · Chapter 2 · 6d, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>2572230 really!:pinkiegasp:


    i'm guessing lucario is your favorite?

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