Updated Description: I have re-written the story, so if you have trouble understanding... well that makes sense. Same plot, but pushed back in time a bit. The old description still stands, however there is going to be less romance in the new version than originally planned. The new version is also a bit slower, but you can read the chapters faster than I can write them, so there should be no problem.
Major point i need to make before hand... I really like Twi x Dash, and is therefore in the story. I have another story that goes into their relationship, however I have not written it yet. telling you so that a few chapters in, you are not confused by the sudden development of their relationship.
So, i don't know if the rewrite is better, however my editor seems to believe so. It may be better than the original first chapter, or worse... I don't know, but this is all a learning experience for me, so if you get some enjoyment out of it, let me know, and if you have criticism I will take it as well.
Original Description: A young filly has a run in with the law, but ends up getting treated pretty nicely. Whats in store for this filly? A new family, a new home, friends, danger, romance, an old family, pain, a past that catches up?
Follow Summer as she goes through one of many ordeals in her life, and find out how ups and downs can bring out the good and bad.
Okay, so I sat down to write one thing, and something else was created... so now i have another idea to add to the pile. This one moves a bit slower than my others I think. Not sure where this is going so all this may change as I go on. Comments and criticism are welcome. At the very least i will be having fun.
14th Jul 2012
31st Jul 2012