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The Random Lord


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After a week of recovering from her return Princess Luna seeks to return what was lost by her banishment and find the one pony she cares for the most... her daughter.

This is a rewrite of my old story. I hope you like it

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

feels like a better start. nice job

I was hoping i have time to finish old version, but happens. Wish best at Rewriting.
ps. I know, I can read them on difrent website.

Yay! Rewrite looks awesome! I loved the old one but I really look forward to seeing how the rewrite goes.

I kinda hope this rewrite has a different ending and goes in a different direction.

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A lot of things will change I can promise that

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I am as well looking forward to see this unfold again. :) The original wasn't bad by any means, so I am definitely following and tracking it. :)

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And I quote from authors notes;

Here is the link to the old story
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8041681/1/Daughter-of-the-Moon

i hope this one has a happier ending were twilight remember luna as her mother, the old one was good but it wasnt a happy ending, i would like to have a happy ending for luna and twi as mother and daughter

This new version got a nice beginning, hope what come after will be as good.

I hope you update this soon, I like it!

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Hey read Twilight's origin then royal secrets revealed.

....Were there more chapters before? I could have swore there was more to this. Anyway I hope that there will be more soon.

This ever going to continue?

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Yeah I planned to... I'm writing backwards. The ends done I'm just struggling with the middle. Then Life problems got in the way. But I'll get there just slowly.

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Yay, I'm so excited to get to read rest eventually:pinkiehappy:

is there going to be more

Could you please keep writing as I would like to see how it goes, thanks

Could you please keep writing, I would like to see how it goes, thanks

Hoping to see this continued.


April 4

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