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A story about Twilight Diana Sparkle, code named Solid Snake, and her first mission. As it goes along everything seems to go well. But as the story moves forward some thing just don't seem to add up. Characters are portrayed differently, Shadow Moses seems to be shifting, and the 4th wall just seems to be crumbling. Can Twilight make sense of the situation and beat the terrorists threat... or is she just going to cheat her way past this game... I mean story by breaking the story it's self.

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FIRST, also, When I saw Twi with an Eyepatch and the Black Hoodie, I thought it was a reference to metal Gear.. lol

I'm still in a dream Snake Eater. Or at least I hope so after reading this. This suffers from the usual crossover syndrome of 'just switching out the characters from a series to another.' I mean it just seems like Metal Gear with the characters as ponies; why would anyone want to read that? If I wanted the experience of reading the story of Metal Gear Solid I'd smoke some shrooms and read Tolstoy for a few hours, not read a fanfic with the characters as ponies from a cartoon. It doesn't offer anything original, and the dialogue is just horribly stilted; the Codec parts especially.

I just don't get the purpose of it; if you wanted to crossover MGS and Ponies, have the characters from those series interact in some way. Or maybe even attempt to crossover the ideas and themes from Metal Gear Solid into the pony world? But that brings across the main problem with crossovers like this, the series are totally incompatible. Metal Gear Solid is a story of many, no matter what your opinions on the series, complex and philosophical looks on humanity and war. My Little Pony is a children's show about friendship and magic. It doesn't fit. If you want to make a comedy story, then you shouldn't be trying to seriously recreate Metal Gear Solid with ponies. If you want to make a serious story, you shouldn't be writing about colorful cartoon ponies meeting the grimdark reality of Metal Gear Solid! It just. Doesn't. Work!

883418 Its spose to start off the same as the games... I plan on changing it more as it progresses. Just for one spoiler... the DARPA chief doesn't die. In fact shes :derpytongue2: the reason the story starts to goes crazy. I have plans for characters to break the 4th wall and even some of them to swap with the original. saying too much will just spoil the whole stupidity of the story... all in all... This Fic is not supposed to be taken seriously. It's just me telling every one how I would make it if it where with ponies. By the way... I'm reading No more ponies... pretty much what I'm doing but with No more heroes... its actually the story the inspired me to write this. Also... please note the thumbs up... It's said that out of 10 people, at least 1 person will like your product. I think I will be ok. Not like I'm looking for fame... I just want to write stuff. I was expecting way more thumbs down than this... really. In fact I kind a hate it. But when ever I go over it or while I work on the other chapters... it just makes me smile.

I haven't gotten started on reading it just yet, but when I read the description, I had to speak up. Solid Snake's first mission with Foxhound was in 1995. It was Operation Intrude N313; the infiltration of Outer Heaven with the intent to rescue Grey Fox so he could complete Operation Intrude N312; the infiltration of Outer Heaven with the intent to discover and destroy Metal Gear. Shadow Moses wasn't until after Snake retired around 2005- 10 years later.

Sorry, I'm just a HUGE Metal Gear nerd.

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Hey, no problem with being a huge fan, I myself am one.:pinkiehappy:

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