A fun little story that came to mind. Luna is afraid of the dark, and asks one of her guards to tell her a bedtime story. It turns out to be very relevant to her.
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Wow. Very well thought out. Little Luna makes my heart explode. Also, HOW ARE THERE NO OTHER COMMENTS AND THUMBS-UPS YET!?!?!?!
This is too good to not be popular. 
It's only been 50 minutes since it was released.
But thank you for the complement!
Liked
Its simple, striaght forwards and contains little Luna. Insta-win!
I love this.
I was sitting here smiling and laughing a bit at how adorable Luna was in this. The story Knight Night told was well thought out and the little interruptions were what made Luna so damn cute.
The way it ended was also great. Just a really nice way to end it, with the moral of the story and the way the knight reassured her.
Wee little adorable Luna and an awesome story. Great job!
If you listen really close, you can hear my ego inflating exponentially for every comment.
Wittil Woona is best Woona. I'm glad I was able to convey that.
My heart exploded. Twice. Little Luna is portrayed so adorably! I even had a squee attack, in between my heart exploding of cuteness
. I tried to give Luna a hug, but my computer screen got in the way. 
I rate this story 5/5 exploding hearts.
25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m45pq8lwuw1rpb34po1_500.png little luna, and celestia.
“They ran away when they saw him loosing.
That needs to be "losing" with one "o"; with two, it means to release something. :P
Other than that minor typo, I found the story VERY enjoyable. Like + Fave, and The Brony Show's pre-show reader seems to enjoy my suggestions, so I'll see if he'll give this a read during their podcast soon. :) It definitely needs more publicity.
I also enjoy the fact that you agree with my head-canon of the Alicorn traits being passed on genetically. The show supports it somewhat with the way the Cakes' foals turned out.
1830837 Edit has been made, thank you for the suport
tell me if it gets on the podcast.To be honest, I only listen to it on occasion.
So cute love the part with him tickling Luna makes you think that if she had heard that story before would she have changed into Nightmare Moon.