interesting, continue please?

Oh I forgot to mention. Since this is my first fix, I'd like critisism whenever possible. A dislike isn't going to make my writing better, but a rant about how much my story sucks and why might.

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Thanks :). I'll need a bit more of an audience before even considering continuing this. Uni is coming up and I doubt I'll be motivated at all if only a handful of people are willing to read what I write.