Well ummmmm not much to say, but its nice to know spike is growing up

This was shit fire hilarious. Not what I expected (Thank god! Ever since I read FlutterWhy4's BIrd and Bees every time I hear someone say that I have relapses.... It was a great story, but REALLY fucking weird... Like, RagingSemi wierd) but still funny. The ending felt a little abrupt to me though.

that is all

sooo, Sequel take 4?

yay

GOD DAMMIT I HAVE SCHOOL! FUCK IT! I'LL READ IT LATER!

"NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE"

I died.

Also, so, since this is a sequel, does that mean there's going to be a sequel to this as well? There's still plenty left to find out, after all. Spike's reaction to Fluttershy's explanation, where Scoots and Spike go from there, etc.

Not bad, but I don't see why this couldn't have been an epilogue to the other story. It's funny, but it doesn't really have enough substance to stand on its own.

Uh. Is this not finished? Cause you just seemed to end it abruptly, and there is a huge space of nothing at the end.

Gotta love Twilight's internal monologue.  This one had me cracking up.

IT was good, but it could have some more details about how shocked was Twilight after Spike told her that question, maybe some flasback from her live as a little filly , anyway it was a good story

HA! Was laughing my tail off when I read this, you got a slight error with spelling, some where...also, you do know that dragons and poines can't have childern without magic right, the only  ones that could even be able to have a child with him in Ponyville becuase they are unicorns  are Twilight (Do you seriously even need to ask one of the most loyal Spilight fans?), Viyal Scrach (This would be new but I'm always down), Sweetie Belle (Would be more then glad to see that), ummm..Pumpkin Cake (Please try not to go there), Rarity *shivers* and.........hmmmmm....I think that may be all the mares from Ponyville, but you get the idea, I likt the top three a lot.

Also, I can'tetell if this is an epic fail for Twilight or an epic win for Spike.

That picture is awesome. TIME TO READ.

I really like your... avatar! Really do! And the story was amazing, really worth reading and fun...

Is there going to be a part 2?

Eh... It seems more like an epilogue for Childsplay than a standalone story. I feel like it should have been longer, so the stories could be linked, but still separate, you know? Great writing and characterisation and all, but a bit insubstantial. I did lol quite a lot, so you nailed the Comedy tag!

Twilight had a 404 Error. Noice.

Personally, I don't think the show's ever mentioned female dragons. Unless I was zoned out when it did...

So his only options if he wants to have an intimate relationship are to date a pony, which is inter-species and weird, or get Twilight to turn him into a pony...

Get the spell books.

One of the few stories that really did have me laughing out loud!

But it does feel very unfinished with that ending...

AND FLUTTERSHY SAVED THE DAY

wait, what ?! how could this be rated complete ?!?!

but i can't stop laughing! great story ! i hope it does't end where it ends now !

.>>882671882671 It WAS awesome.

i think she ended it like that so the next story could, (if she decided to write it) be fluttershy teaching spike. and what with her way with animals, maybe fluttershy really IS a dragon tamer.

OH, FUCK!

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well played sir

well played

>>882712882712

also, you do know that dragons and poines can't have childern without magic right,

... sorry, but where are you getting that information from? I can pretty much guarantee you that nothing on the subject has been said in canon, which means it's up to each individual author to decide what can and can't happen in their storyverses.

In many fantasy worlds, dragons can breed with damn near anything.  And I've frequently seen kirin/quilin in this fandom as the result of dragon/pony crossbreeding, including at least one story-based Tumblr that asserts Princess Luna's Bat Guards are kirin.

TL;DR version: Dragons and ponies can have kids together if TwiClop damn well wants them to.

THIS IS GLORIOUS. More please, kind sir.

LMFAO I LIKED IT

lololololol

>>882950882950 Yo, calm down..and I thought it might be true true due to the fact that ponies and dragons are two different species, or am I wrong on the matter at hoof? You could be right though....at any rate, it's up to the author, just thought I try to add my two cents.

This is the next, and only logical outcome:

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This is actually more well written that at first glance. I like Spike's ignorance throughout this whole thing. Ignorance in the experimentation. And you know, this also got me thinking: Hmm... What IS so terribly wrong about that? Spike seems happy so... haha... yeah.

There must be moar! MOAR I SAY! MOOOAAAARR!!!!

That is to say, if you don't mind...

I actually really like this storyline, and I hope it gets continued.

>>883386883386

This is a brilliant one-shot.

...AND IT SHOULD STAY THAT WAY.

That is all.

Kidding aside, that made me laugh the whole time I was (attempting) to read this.

I see what did thar. Also, that had to be one of the funniest things I have read in a long while. Thank you for that TC *wipes tear from eye*

I literally couldn't breathe. I hope this is meant to be funny, cuz I laughed like a two month playing peekaboo. Excellent writing friend.

this is awesome! i demand moar!

i want to see Rarity's reaction when Sweetie mentions that the CMC played 'the Rarity game' with Spike!

i want to see what the Apple family will do when Applebloom tells them about the 'Games' they played with Spike!

i want to see what happens when Scootaloo boasts to Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie about 'Tameing' Spike!

i want to see Spike tell Fluttershy what happend and see her reaction!

but most of all i want to see the Friendship Report to Celestia!

Woah woah woah, for all Twilight knows Luna DOES like to eat bricks.

I'm sure they're delicious after a thousand years of moon rocks.

Dat cover picture.

'Nuff said.

Uh... wow.

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Tracking!

I saw 'Birds and Bees' in the popular stories list and thought "Whoa! My story is back in the popular section after 4 months?" then I clicked and saw this.

Lol I saw this and thought i twas that sex one.

This is better..

>>883299883299 I agree, my good sir :D

>>884820884820 Incorrect

I can't stop laughing.

Very good.

Fricking LOLZ.

Scoots and Spike are both from flying races, and they can't fly. Their kid's going to have rocks for feet. Just... boulders. Won't be able to even jump, let alone fly.

Haha, oh Twilight xD -NOPENOPENOPE-

Have a good one.

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Twilights Mind

You have to write how the rest of the Mane 6 react to what happened at the sleepover maybe now they'll learn not to leave Spike alone when they're having a sleepover. Maybe next time they even invite him to the next one.

>>883626883626

Even though it's in a series?

I'm talking about the series here, because it's been hilarious every step of the way, no matter how out of hoof the character's antics may have gotten.

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This is why I love you, Twilightclopple and your writing.

I've never read Childsplay, but I'm considering it. There's not enough ScootaSpike on the internet

Ith brungh thyou shome chookies Spike!

Hurr durr

the levels of win.....

are so dangerously high...

SHUT DOWN THE BRAIN BEFORE..!!!

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>>882950882950

>>882712882712

Obviously he's forgot about Shrek 2

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i could barely hold in my laughter at the "NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE!" parts!

>>892510892510 Jeez thanks bro, way to help a hybrid out....also, I have seen the movie just forgot.

Mind is blown, and I'm the god-damn Auditor, HOW CAN MY MIND BE BLOWN AT THIS!

Freakout Twilight is almost always best Twilight.

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>>892776892776

NP I changed it for you /]

Huh. Now it's labeled "incomplete". Strange happenings are afoot.

Loved Twilight's mental breakdown. Though I have to wonder, would a bookworm like her really delay giving Spike "The Talk" for so long?

...Yes. Yes, she might very well do exactly that.

And later spike says "...Oh Buck...I did THAT with Scootaloo!?"

What would Fluttershy's face be?

Lmao!  Loved it!  But quick question, what happened to your other stories? I remember two others before this one.  The one before this, and another involving a sleepover.  

I just... So bucking hilarious!

>>883626883626 Hahahahahaahahah! AHAHAHAHAAHAHAH! You serious?

This? This gold? Right here? It shouldn't be continued? You crazy person, that's funny :V.

Please, if you have ANY idea at all on how to continue this, do so. This could actually turn into something. I have NO IDEA what, but who knows!

And damn it, Twilight, have you ever eaten a brick before? It tastes like concrete! Concrete, clay, and just a pinch of carbon monoxide!

And I'll be DAMNED if I didn't say it was delicious!

That was hilarious.   HA

Wow... This little sequel to the 3 previous stories is pure gold. I loved how Spike was describing every bit of detail to Twilight... also knowing that she and her friends were in such heat hours prior to this incident....

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My mind exploded at this and I hope you will continue to write more to this story!

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PLEASE WRITE MOAR!

PS: favortie line was, "... if Luna's favorite midnight snack were bricks."

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At least the events in Spike's recount didn't make it all the way to home plate. The unicorn breathed an inward sigh of relief as the idea registered in her mind as it grinded back to life, thanking Celestia above for small mercies.

What if he did hit "home plate", if you know what I mean . . .

I get the feeling there's more story here.  This feels more like an introduction.  Not a completed story.

    Twilight's eyebrow cocked involuntarily. The name alone had a kinky ring to it.

     "...Scootaloo tackled me..."    

     The unicorn put on an understanding face, while her insides curled into fetal position.

      "...It got all weird, this one part of me started to get really..."

      Professionalism was for the strong, and Twilight was weak, so very, very weak as she bucked it out the window.

      "...moving against me, rubbing on..."

     Her mind may as well have been in a blender.  NOPENOPENOPENOPE-

    "...felt so amazing, then this thing happened, all my muscles like clenched up, and..."

     Twilight continued to wear an understanding expression. -NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE-

Best. Lines. EVER.

I almost died at  "No, that's because the rest of them are in my bedside stand."

i just can't get over how funny this is

*Sees Sequesl*

!!!YES

*Incomplete and threefore progression is in updates8

FUCK!!!!UPDATE NAO~~~~!!!!

My dear lady, please continue this.

I know what she meant by them all being in her bedtime stand...

um is this fic still alive?

Saw this fic coming but still loved it, specially Twi's reactions.

Twilight, you pussy.

.....I think you broke my brain.

FIX IT. I NEED IT FOR WORK, DAMMIT.

I had a Fridge Logic moment when reading this.

How did Spike get from the 'game' he played with the Crusaders to the question "where do babies come from", unless he already had a fairly good idea of the answer?

"Twilight couldn't have been less convinced if Luna had just declared her favorite midday snack to be bricks." Best line that I've ever seen!