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Each pony of the main six randomly starts seeing questionable images within their heads.
Rainbow Dash envisions herself with Pinkie Pie, and vise versa.
Rarity and Fluttershy see these images of themselves, too, and so does Twilight and Applejack.
Twilight decides it must be some sort of pattern, but what does it all mean?
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first story, so be kind!
A small note.
I'm not good with Applejack's country grammar and putting it into textual form. Besides, when I read other works similar to this and it doesn't have her accent put into textual form, I'm still able to hear her accented voice in my head. So if this is a big problem for some of you, I apologize.
Sounds like an interesting premise.
I'll add to my To-read list.
882080 we want to read stories, not ads for jeans, go advertise somewhere else
Looks interesting.
Imma put it on my favourites for now.
No offense, but that is REALLY predictable.
?
Also, no AppleShy
883459... Darn! What gave it away?
Was it the title? It was the title, wasn't it... GAH
Lol, no I knew it would be a little predictable, but eh, I'm working on making the ending slightly more surprising.
INB4 the events awaken repressed memories from the time Celestia and Luna weilded the Elements of Harmony!
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
889661 Idk what that means. (INB4)
889762
Really!
INB4 = "In before".
You've never heard that?
You must be new here, son.
Impossibru!!!
890036 Lol, only a few days old on the site.
But then, I have worked on this story since I joined. Actually, it was my friend that suggested to me the idea of making the curse/spell a seventh element.
My initial intent was to just make them fall in love out of nowhere. She represented it as an idea and I stuck with it. She didn't want me to include her name in the story due to excuses she won't let me tell you about, but she is now letting me put this detail in a mere comment! 
they seemed a little too prepared for it, not enough shock...and to be honest a little out of my taste. but i will continue
not sure what to think of this. i dont like it...but i dont not like it. you have the talent for writing, please just use it for humans falling from the sky like most others
it was just too awkward reading this, not sure why i did, very unexpected ending. good luck with any other stories you are writing or planning to write...but i gotta say, its just a little strange to see someone write about the mane six making out with each other. but keep doing it if that's what your good at! i know some people do enjoy these stories
892720 Yea, I said in the first comment, this is the first story I ever made. Pls read my other comments as well. My friend who shall not be named was the one who wanted love to be one of the original elements of harmony. I switched the idea to make the technical 7th element a curse. In any case, thanks for reading, and I'm making more stories, but I still need opinions, good and bad.
892773 It is a good story but i sorta think that you made spike a little t smart on the matter of twijack
894195
Look at the mustache! He is genius!
No, I get what your saying, actually, you reminded me of something I need to edit in my fic! Thanks a ton!
894219
Applejack is one word, also, what is Jules? Did you mean jewels?
Edit: read the whole story, ALL THESE WORDS NEED CAPITAL LETTERS. Also somepony and everypony are one word
901202 I realize this and intend to make changes. However, I am working on another very important fiction at the time, so this will have to wait!
894229>>894195>>892720>>890036>>889661 To anybody who finds these couples simply adorable, I found a video that might suit this story for an ending!
927525 do i wanna know?
or will it just make me sick
927541 I thought the video was cute! The link is at the bottom of the ending.
And here I am, digging up a well-known author's old fanfiction. ARE YOU EMBARRASSED YET?
1710205 OH GOD NO!
Please... D-d-don't read this. It's an embarrassment!
1710214
Oh... oh I will. Hehehe...
[Insert evil laughing gif that I am too lazy to find here]
1710226
I've improved since this, so hit me with your best shot. Any criticism is, as always, appreciated.
1710245
Eh, there's no point in criticising this fic. Won't bother. Obviously you've improved since then.
In the meantime, trying to figure out who Fabric Detail is in An Oddly Arousing Evening. Already figured out who the other characters are, lul.
1710272 Designer, and he's an OC of mine. What do you mean, the other two???
1710280
Heh, I pride myself on trying to learn what is going on everywhere. Green-tipped feathers on the griffin/gryphon/griffon/howeverthefuckyouwanttospellit, red and blue unicorn. Couldn't catch the description of Fabric Detail, but, I gather a lot of info. Swift is Wanderer D, and Mirrors is Alexstraza. Aren't they?
The FIMfiction staff together in a clopfic. Nine hoof-picked members. And then you look at their ambiguous comments on said story...
1710329 ...
Err...
I'm bound by word to say I have no idea what you're talking about. W~D and Alex had nothing to do with the story, and all you need to know is it's a silly, R63 clopfic.
...
Please keep this a complete secret as no one is supposed to deduce the obvious. Thank you.
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lul. It is rather obvious, isn't it? Those green-tipped feathers should set off bells in everyone's heads if they're watching WD.
Also, I noticed that comments keep the name of the user when they were posted. You old comments have your name in lower case. (It's slightly bugging me.) Also all the names of the chapters are in lower case. Argh. And so many question marks in the description...
But still, it's kinda obvious. How many people have figured it out so far?
1710431 Just you, and this one guy named The Scatman. Other than that... I think that's all... I hope...
Yeah, this fiction is old, OLD, OLD! You'll notice, I rarely make those simple errors anymore. I leave this fic up to remind myself of my ridiculous mistakes, which I am actually now seeing quite plainly.
Someday I might just have to give this a revamp, and a hardcore edit.
1710457
Well, I can see that you've greatly improved over the course 20 weeks. Hell, I wrote my first fanfic a year ago, got on EqD with it, and then haven't uploaded anything since. So I likely haven't improved all that much. I'm so unproductive.
1710551 Links direct over to DA... Well, that's a little messed up... Hmm...
1710584
Yeah, I'm the same person. I didn't like the formatting of FIMfiction back in those days, and so I uploaded to DA and Fanfic.net. (What a terrible site.) Only recently uploaded here, and it went live at a time noone was online. lul. All my favorite fanfics back then were on DA, or gdocs, and people can't leave comments on gdocs. So that's where it went.
1710609 Hmm, you should take some time and write more on here. I've learned more than I ever thought I could from friends, critics... Train Wreck Explorers... Even if it's not on my fiction, the criticism, flaw pointing, help; all of it is great for just about anyone who likes to write!
1710640
Yeah. I really should write more. Instead, I sit on my laptop, trying to read and learn everything without actually putting it to use. Well, I feel like I am helping somewhat while I edit other's fics, but... yeah, I've got this rather dark fic that I'm trying to write. Only written one chapter, and I'm kinda overly verbose in the wrong areas. Want to take a look at it? It's my first attempt at more serious writing. It'd be nice for a more experienced writer to tear it to shreds.
1710692 I'm busy, but... yeah, sure, send the link in a P.M. and I'll look over it. Is it in Gdocs? Meh, I'll find out later.
Wow. You sure have come a long way with writing. Looking at this, then your most recent story, it's funny to see just how much you have improved.
Nostalgia!
2036681 No, do not look. It is not good. Shield your eyes!!!
Yes. Hell yes. Hell. Fucking. Yes.
i got a noteafication that this was twidash.:| >:| >:( .WTF i've be lied to.holly fuck!out the window(jumps out the window)
2716722 I removed it, it was an accident, sorry for the inconvenience.
2716725 ok ok.and thanks,
Good story, even if I read expecting some TwiDash
, but It's good any way, thumb up.