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Sunshine and Moondust are two orphans trying to find out who they are. What they don't realize is that they are connected and that their connection goes much deeper than sisterhood. They are bound to Eclipse, the alicorn, by an ancient and dark spell. Now they must first find each other and then find a way to break the spell and release themselves. The only problem is that the 3 mares are the same pony. On their adventure they'll find out much more about Harmony than ever before. And to add to their adventure I've thrown in a love interest with Blaze, the "hot" fire dancing stallion. Along the way they also meet Charisma, a cat trying to find a place to call home. Not to mention Rumble and Bumble, the twin Changelings who haven't quite figured out how to use their powers. Along with their new band of friends, Moondust, Sunshine, and Eclipse begin their journey. The three ponies don't know what they'll find a long the way, but they are determined to free themselves.

Special thanks to idahoninja for editing XD
Criticism and comments welcome, but please keep it pg people. XD

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

Criticism is welcomed. I want to make this story really great so if you notice something off or think i should have done something differently please feel free to let me know. Thanks. -- Quae

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Um right now I am currently working on the third chapter, but it still needs some work. I will let you know a day or two before I post it.

Okay so I have finished chapter 3 and I'm working on chapter 4 I just need my editor to review what I have and then I can post the next chapter. I hope everyone is enjoying what I've done so far and I can't wait to entertain you and hopefully more people in the future. Feel free to share the story with your friends. :)

cant wait for the next chapter and why did that alicorn recite that curse does it need to be done so they can all 3 live or something? :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad you are enjoying it. :D The three ponies have to follow the curse Merlina cast on them in the prologue. They do it every week and they are taken there against their will.

The next chapter will probably be up on Thursday

cant wait for the next chapter

I just got back from a camping trip so I havn't had much time to work on the story. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up sometime this week though :twilightsmile:

New chapters coming along... This one is going to be the longest yet. A lot of explanation is necessary. It will be up though... eventually...

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